Last line rocked, I'm giggleing like a school girl...and although i AM a schoolgirl I DO NOT giggle--usually, lol. Great chappie!
Author's Response: Aw, come on...you know you like a good giggle! Thanks!
EEP! I love it! I was gonna wait till I finished to give you a real nice, long review, but I just couldn't stand it any longer, I just had to tell you how wonderful this is, Kristeh!
I love how Harry got Snape to eat cake, and how Snape ran his finger thru Harry's hair and comforted him, and how Harry almost cried when everyone came in with the cake. So sweet!
I love it!
Now I'm off to read more, this is so awesome!
-Elise
Author's Response: Thanks, Elise!
Great chapter! Ohmigosh, I love it when you described how Harry was feeling when they were talking about Umbridge. I also love how Harry almost cried because he never had a birthday! I love things like that -- I need more! *grin* hahaha
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Poor Harry really has had a rough life in many ways, but things will get better for him now!
Wonderful as always! Please keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've just finished the next chapter and am getting ready to post it now!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 13 Oct 2007 3:24 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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What a lovely update.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
A brilliant chapter again. I especially love the part when Harry invites Severus to his birthday party - really nicely done :-)
Author's Response: Thank you, teddy! Glad you liked it!
I loved that Harry thought to ask Severus to participate in the party--and Slytherined him into having to be a part of the "fun."
Author's Response: Thank you! You know, I enjoyed the birthday party scene. I thought Harry could really empathize with Severus here, seeing him being left out, and Harry can definitely be a bit sneaky.
I like it. WHooo go SnApe!
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 9
| 12 Oct 2007 8:14 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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The slow build up of the relationship between Harry and Snape is well done. The hidden care that Snape has for Harry, the trust that Harry is beginning to have for Snape is beautifully done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really glad you like Harry and Severus' relationship--I'm having to sit on my hands to keep from rushing things along.
Aww cute chapter! That was good that Harry got to have a birthday party afterall. Great chapter and keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying!
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