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Title: Chapter 11 23 Oct 2007 11:45 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a cute chapter :-). Severus and Harry telling each other about their childhood is great! Looking forward to the update :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 11 22 Oct 2007 10:56 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww...that ending scene is just too perfect! Really great chapter and keep writing, you've definatly got a good muse!

    I really enjoyed seeing Harry's inner monologue when he was deciding (or trying to decide) how to act toward Severus. It seems that their relationship has progressed at a good rate and is extremely realistic the way you state it, with excellent characterization!

    It was nice to see Harry realize that his life has changed-through denouncing his title of Seeker. It would be cool if he continued to play, but understandable if he instead decides to practice deuling or something "more important" to him now that Voldermort is out and about. It's good to see this maturity and acceptance of fate, I guess you could call it. Well, good luck with that!

    Hopefully we get more on Severus' background, which will let his relationship with Harry grow even more. I do wonder how Potions will go this coming term...I forget, does Voldermort know that Severus betrayed him?...I think so...I do wonder how he will be treated in the classroom by his Slytherins, especially if he alters his teaching style and begins to encourage his students (including a particular trio of sixth-year Gryffindors!)

    Well, write us another good chapter...and remember, it's not quantity, but quality that matters! Truthfully, I didn't notice that it was a short chapter because so much was packed into it that kept it brilliant!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!  I thought Harry would be feeling very unsure about Severus at this point and how to act around him.  Severus has been much nicer than Harry initially expected, but after the past five years, he can't quite trust him yet either.  Harry just has lots of conflicting emotions about Severus right now.

    Ultimately, Quidditch will become a moot point, but yeah, Harry does realize that things are changing for him, and that there are things more important.  Good thing Oliver Wood wasn't in Harry's place, huh?  The Wizarding World would be in big trouble.

    And yep, there will be more about Severus' past coming up later, and Potions class will be a little different this year.

    Thanks again for your kind words.  I guess the chapter really isn't that short---it's longer than the previous one anyway.  It just seemed shorter to me because there was a lot more I wanted to put into it, but oh, well,  there's always the next chapter, right? 

     

     

Title: Chapter 11 22 Oct 2007 4:45 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    oh... happy sigh. sweet chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 11 22 Oct 2007 7:41 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh!! >< I freaking love this story!!!! xD hahaha
    Update soon, please! If I have to resort to begging -- if that makes you update faster, I will! haha, jklol! d:

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you like it!  You don't have to beg, though (unless of course, you just want to), but I'm updating as fast as I can.  I'd love to just sit at my computer and work on my story all day, but unfortunately, real life just doesn't allow it!
Title: Chapter 11 22 Oct 2007 7:30 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness! It happened! I'm doing a happy dance, I'm doing a happy dance!

    Author's Response: Hee, hee!  Thank you!  I'm happy that you're happy!
Title: Chapter 11 22 Oct 2007 6:13 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really good chapter! I especially loved the ending!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 11 22 Oct 2007 5:34 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    awww the end of the chapter was so sweet. It's intresting that Severus decided to devulge information about his own childhood in the way that he did. It's nice to see the way Harry responded to it, and starting opening up about the Dursleys. I sense the start of a really great friendship. Keep up the awesome work, and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Severus and Harry will be both share more about their childhoods as the story goes along, and they'll find that they can really empathize with one another.  I do plan on them having a great friendship.  Thanks again!  

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