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Title: Chapter 15 21 Nov 2007 2:11 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    A great chapter again! Amazingly written :-)
    Good that Severus made a room for Harry and allowed him to stay there.
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter - and to your Christmas story, too, of course :-)
    Greetings
    teddy

    Author's Response: Thanks, Teddy!  Glad you liked it, and I hope you'll like the Christmas story too!
Title: Chapter 15 17 Nov 2007 11:11 pm
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, great chapter! I wonder if Harry, always getting the urge to cry, will actually do so -- cry, I mean. ^^;

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, Harry did break down once before, and he may again at some point.  I do tend to like angst and mush, but I'm trying not to make it too awfully sappy, while showing that it really does mean a lot to Harry to feel wanted and loved.
Title: Chapter 15 16 Nov 2007 11:24 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    "We'll make your room after we've eaten." Oh, to be a wizard! Great update! I love how the relationship between Harry and Severus has grown.

    I really liked Harry's uneasiness at returning to the Tower, and Seveurs' responce of letting him stay in the Dungeons with him. It was great, and I love that line too! Like, it takes months for us muggles to add on a room to a house, much less a dungeon! But great characterization on our two favorite guys!

    It was also great to have Neville and Luna stop by, and Ginny too!! But, Luna had said how difficult O.W.L. year is, I thought she was in the same year as the trio. Hmm, it's been a while since I've read Order of the Pheonix.

    But I can't wait until Harry returns to classes, next chapter right?, right? Ahh! I can't wait!! Good luck writing!

    Author's Response:

    It would be wonderful to have magic, wouldn't it?  I can't tell you how many times I've started cleaning my house and wished that I could just snap my fingers (or wave a wand) and have it all be done.  I'm glad you liked Harry's and Severus' relationship in this chapter.  I meant to show that they took a significant step here---they've been growing closer, but it was circumstances beyond their control (Harry's injuries) that threw them together.  Now they're consciously planning for the friendship to continue once Harry is well.

    Glad you liked Neville and Luna, and Harry will go back to class soon, but I'm not sure if it will happen in the next chapter or the one after---I let the characters start talking and then they just won't quit, you know. 

    Thanks again! 

Title: Chapter 15 16 Nov 2007 9:52 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm glad Harry got his own room and that Snape decorated it just for him. It was nice to see Luna and Neville pop in too. Keep up the great writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I really enjoyed writing this chapter, so I'm really glad you liked it.  I've always been fond of Neville and Luna, though Luna is really hard to write---which is why I didn't have her say very much! 

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