Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 16 11 Oct 2011 2:33 pm
Reviewer: summer (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey! Awesome chapter! Okay, so I'm trying to get people to go to fictionpress.com and read my story, Amuran (and I had no idea that there was a Japenese ferris wheel called that). So go on! Reveiw!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 16 21 Feb 2008 5:47 am
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I love that! Beautiful!
    Oh, so sweet, I'm crying AGAIN!
    I love it, thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  That scene is one of my favorites, too!
Title: Chapter 16 25 Jan 2008 3:47 pm
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter! i love that moment between them -- aww! *grin*

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 16 20 Jan 2008 4:44 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Good job.
    I'm sure that Harry wouldn't be able to explain his inability to ask for help. Really, if you think about it, he's never been able to get help from an adult when he needs it.
    Even if he would think about asking Snape there would still be a part telling him not to so that he's not disappointed again. Especially by someone who he's starting to care about.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Harry was still very confused about his feelings for Severus here.  Or maybe not so much confused, but just not sure if he can completely trust Severus yet, especially once they were back in the classroom and Severus was 'Professor Snape' and not just 'Severus'.  And yes, Harry has been let down too many times before to trust adults easily.  It is a very good thing that Severus handled the situation so well.  I see that moment in class as a point where their relationship could have gone either way...if he had reacted in anger to Harry not knowing the material, Harry would have had a hard time trusting him again.      
Title: Chapter 16 03 Dec 2007 3:51 am
Reviewer: B. E. Skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter, please continue this!

    Author's Response: Thank you, and I am working on the next chapter tonight!
Title: Chapter 16 02 Dec 2007 10:45 am
Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great story. I love the interactions between Harry and Severus. I can't wait to see what happens now that Harry is back attending classes.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  And Harry does have a big year ahead!
Title: Chapter 16 30 Nov 2007 6:43 am
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww!! I love this! Poor Harry, and awesome Severus! This chapter was just brilliant!

    I love the discriptions of Harry's trepidation at returning to class, especially Potions. It also fits perfectly that he would feel that way about asking Severus for help, he's helped him so much already. Also liked how Harry reacted to Neville's body bind, although it felt a little out of character for him to divulge that piece of information so bluntly. But then again, he wanted to tell them in as few words as possible. I'm so glad that Harry and Severus have progressed this far, it really was a long way.

    Sorry for the short review, but it was a truly impressive chapter and I can't wait for more!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you liked it!  I got a rather mean review on FF.N about Severus in this chapter, so I'm so happy that people here liked it!  I do think Harry might feel a little nervous about returning to class, so much has happened to him.  He knows that things are different between him and Severus now, but I think deep inside he still has some issues about the past--they really haven't dealt with it, after all.  But they have come a long way, and they'll get through it.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 16 29 Nov 2007 1:44 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter. Loved the nice tender scene between Severus and Harry. I liked too, the info about some of Snape's Slytherins wanting revenge on him. Good details. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I love writing the scenes with Severus and Harry.  I'm still debating on how much the Slytherins (mainly Draco)  will figure into the story, but I thought I should put in something about them and how they're reacting to the news about Severus.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 10:42 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm SO glad that Severus kept his temper.

    Author's Response: Yes, that was a good thing, wasn't it?  If he'd lost it, Harry would have a very hard time trusting him again.  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 3:18 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    A great chapter again - especially the description of Harry's feelings. I like the interactions between Snape and Harry in your story!
    Hope to talk to you again, soon :-)
    teddy

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Teddy,

    Thanks so much!  I'm glad you liked it.  Harry and Severus are always fun to write!


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