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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Potions Professor
Author's Response: Thanks!
Oh, so sweet, I'm crying AGAIN! I love it, thank you! Author's Response: Thank you! That scene is one of my favorites, too!
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I'm sure that Harry wouldn't be able to explain his inability to ask for help. Really, if you think about it, he's never been able to get help from an adult when he needs it. Even if he would think about asking Snape there would still be a part telling him not to so that he's not disappointed again. Especially by someone who he's starting to care about. Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Harry was still very confused about his feelings for Severus here. Or maybe not so much confused, but just not sure if he can completely trust Severus yet, especially once they were back in the classroom and Severus was 'Professor Snape' and not just 'Severus'. And yes, Harry has been let down too many times before to trust adults easily. It is a very good thing that Severus handled the situation so well. I see that moment in class as a point where their relationship could have gone either way...if he had reacted in anger to Harry not knowing the material, Harry would have had a hard time trusting him again.
Author's Response: Thank you, and I am working on the next chapter tonight!
Author's Response: Thank you! And Harry does have a big year ahead!
I love the discriptions of Harry's trepidation at returning to class, especially Potions. It also fits perfectly that he would feel that way about asking Severus for help, he's helped him so much already. Also liked how Harry reacted to Neville's body bind, although it felt a little out of character for him to divulge that piece of information so bluntly. But then again, he wanted to tell them in as few words as possible. I'm so glad that Harry and Severus have progressed this far, it really was a long way. Sorry for the short review, but it was a truly impressive chapter and I can't wait for more!! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I got a rather mean review on FF.N about Severus in this chapter, so I'm so happy that people here liked it! I do think Harry might feel a little nervous about returning to class, so much has happened to him. He knows that things are different between him and Severus now, but I think deep inside he still has some issues about the past--they really haven't dealt with it, after all. But they have come a long way, and they'll get through it. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love writing the scenes with Severus and Harry. I'm still debating on how much the Slytherins (mainly Draco) will figure into the story, but I thought I should put in something about them and how they're reacting to the news about Severus. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Yes, that was a good thing, wasn't it? If he'd lost it, Harry would have a very hard time trusting him again. Thanks!
Hope to talk to you again, soon :-) teddy Author's Response: Hi, Teddy, Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. Harry and Severus are always fun to write! |
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