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Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 7:36 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! I'm glad that Severus didn't make a big deal out of Harry not knowing the answer. And finally Harry is able to attend classes with his arms healed. I liked how Harry almost freaked out over the body bind from Neville. That shows that he isn't some superperson that got over the kidnapping incident really quickly. Great chapter and I am eagerly awaiting more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Harry does still have lots of issues from the past--the kidnapping, Severus' past treatment, his life with the Dursleys--that he's trying to forget and ignore, but he's going to have to deal with them at some point.  It won't be easy for him, but he does have people who love him and will help him get through it.  Thanks again.
Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 6:25 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Boy - giving points to Gryffindor! That's a big move for Snape!

    As always, loved how you wrote the Harry and Snape interactions. His very tender "talk" at the end was so touching.

    Thanks for the new chapter and looking forward to the next.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Severus has really come a long way, but he does want to show Harry that things are different, and praising him in class and giving points to Gryffindor was a surefire way of doing it, at least that was what Severus had planned.  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007 5:11 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a really great chapter, I'm glad that Severus recognized there was a problem with Harry instead of baiting him into a fight like in the past. It's good to see him encourage Harry to come to him if he has any problems, it's going to be a very large step in the right direction for the both of them. Really looking forward to more, keep up the awesome work and please please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    Hey, thanks!  I'm glad you liked it!  It will be a big step for Harry and Severus if Harry learns to come to him for help, but that's going to be hard for Harry.  He's not used to going to any adult for help, and he still has some issues about Severus' past treatment, for all that he's trying to forget it.  I'll try to begin the next chapter tonight.

     

       


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