Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 20 25 Jan 2008 8:42 pm
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh, great chapter! >
Title: Chapter 20 04 Jan 2008 7:43 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    *Gasp* How did I miss this update???? *screams in agony* Eventhough I missed it on the first round and it was 'short' (which I don't think is a bad thing, it was a good place to end!) this was still a powerful chapter!

    It was smart of Hermione to use the mirror to contact Snape, and luckily Dumbledore was there at the time. I also like how you continue to add cannon facts to the story while keeping it your own. It was also great to see Severus come to terms with his and Harry's relationship, to also see what he wants out of that relationship as well.

    I'm just glad that I don't have to wait for another update but can keep reading, so if you'll excuse me...

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you found it!  Your comments are always fun to read!  Youknew that mirror was going to come in handy, didn't you?  I laid it on pretty thick.  Yep, Severus and Harry just continue to make progress, but there are still some bumps in the road ahead. 
Title: Chapter 20 01 Jan 2008 9:48 pm
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was indeed tryly evil! Happy New Year!! Now please don't start out the year by keeping us sitting on the edge of our computer chairs... More PLEASE!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try to update by the weekend, okay?  It's the best I can do!
Title: Chapter 20 31 Dec 2007 11:03 pm
Reviewer: B. E. Skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ohh, that *is* an evil cliffhanger! Please, update soon. Update! Update! UUUUPDAAAATE!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try to update as quickly as I can! 
Title: Chapter 20 31 Dec 2007 3:55 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no! Evil, evil cliffhanger. Well, now I know how you all felt, anyway. :oP

    Loved this chapter and the previous one too. I loved especially the "dad" part. That was pretty great. Awesome.

    I hope Harry's alright, though. Hurry with the next chapter, please!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!   I'll try to update again by the weekend!
Title: Chapter 20 31 Dec 2007 12:43 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Definitely evil. Man people on this site love to torture and hurt poor Harry! However I must protest the lack of brains in all three for not checking the package. I mean, come on, Harry just got well from being captured and tortured, plus with his past he should trust no one...one word portkey. Hermione alone should have checked the package, especially with a student they didn't recognize. Love this Sev. Keep up the great work and Happy New Year.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, and Happy New Year to you, too!  Well, at least Harry isn't really conscious for all this with the cursed necklace.  He won't remember the screaming and convulsions, so that's a lot better than if he was aware of it.  I'm really very soft-hearted and can't bear torture scenes.  The little bit I wrote way back in ch. 3, or maybe it was ch.4, was all I could manage, and I could barely stand that.  I usually have to skip the torture scenes.

    You do have a point, with the possibility of the parcel being a portkey, but thankfully it wasn't one.  And I don't know if I made this clear, but Harry didn't actually open the wrapping to see what was inside.  He turned it over in his hands; there happened to be a small rip in the paper, and Harry's fingers brushed against it.  Very similar to what happened with Katie Bell in HBP.

    I'm so glad you like Severus.  I think I've softened him up considerably from canon, but I just can't help it.  Thanks again!  

     

Title: Chapter 20 30 Dec 2007 7:03 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I can just hear you laughing that "evil laugh." That was was a humdinger of a cliffhanger!

    So glad Severus has seen the error of his ways with Harry. And that Hermione had the sense to use the mirror.

    Hope you're writing fast because we need the next chapter NOW! Hee hee...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I made it pretty obvious that Harry was going to need that mirror, didn't I?  I'm re-decorating my daughter's room and will probably be pretty busy with that for a couple days, but I hope to update again by next weekend, or at least on Saturday or Sunday. 
Title: Chapter 20 30 Dec 2007 12:13 pm
Reviewer: veritas427 (Signed) [Report This]
    Well it is now 4 a.m Sunday morning, I started reading your story from the beginning around 1am, thinking that I would read a chapter or two, and then call it a night. However, my initial plan did not work out as I became more and more enraptured with the story and its overall plot. Kudos on a great story! I just wish that I had read this story before hand, however I have to admit it was nice to be able to go from chapter to chapter without delay. Although, I do apologize for not reviewing every chapter. Well I can't wait to see what happens with Harry and the cursed object, hopefully Severus will be able to save the day without serious repercussions for Harry. I wonder if you plan on making this story into either an adoption or at least give Severus custody of Harry, was that "Dad" foreshadowing perhaps? lol. Alright, well excellent chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens next, hopefully you won't make us wait too long. Thanks for updating and giving us something to enjoy.

    Author's Response: Wow, thank you!  I hardly know what to say, except that I'm very happy you found my story and are enjoying it!  Thank you for leaving such a great review...I've got a big smile on my face reading it.  You know, I've said all along that Severus' and Harry's relationship would remain unofficial...that they would become very close, but I would avoid Severus adopting Harry or becoming a legal guardian.  But people keep mentioning it, and in the last day or so, I've begun to reconsider.  So who knows?  Maybe Harry will end up adopted after all.  Anway, thanks again, so much! 
Title: Chapter 20 30 Dec 2007 10:07 am
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    That was really a fast chapter *wow*
    And a great chapter as well...
    Your cliffie... well, I'm sure you will let Sev and Dumbledore heal him - otherwise you should add 'character's death' to your warnings *smiles*
    Anyway, thanks for the quick update, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter :-)

    Author's Response: Aw, but Teddy, there is a 'character death' warning for my story!  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 20 30 Dec 2007 9:23 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the twist with Harry touching the necklace. Poor Harry just isn't going to get a break this year. Pretty please with cherries on top can you update again soon?? :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, in some ways Harry has it rough, but at least he isn't really conscious for any of this--he won't remember anything about being cursed, so that's better than if  he was aware of it all.  We've started re-decorating my daughter's room, so I won't have a chance to write for a few days, but I'll try to update before next weekend.

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