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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Potions Professor
Great chapter! ^^ Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! Severus knows some things about the Dursleys: that Harry did all the housework and yardwork, that they didn't feed or dress him properly, and he saw scars across Harry's back way in the beginning...seeing those scars was the major catalyst for him to realise he'd been wrong about the kind of person Harry is. But he doesnt' know about the cupboard yet...But he will soon!
I really liked how Severus reacted to Harry's "you need to keep me alive so I can kill Volie" statement, it was very heartfelt and so true! I really can't wait to see how Harry adjusts to life in the dungeons and how he reacts when he finally realizes that Severus is giving up a lot in order to keep Harry safe too. It was good to see someone else thinking along the same lines as me for once on the topic of Holloween. I never quite understood why Harry was so ok with Holloween, I'm pretty sure that if my parents were murdered, I'd feel depressed on that certain day. So, I like how you put that in, eventhough it was kinda depressing to me...but, Sev being nice and understanding about it made that go away pretty fast. I, along with lots of other readers aparently, like how you've brought Fleur back into the story. Hopefully she'll be hanging around Sev's office and quarters so we can see her some more! I seriously can't wait to see some of these tutor lessons...hmmm...and Sev's reaction to the blood quill. That should be interesting. So, is Harry going to head the DA still and is it going to be in the dungeons...hmmm...I don't suppose you can really answer those, I'll just have to wait for the next chapter. Hope it comes soon! I actually am working on a fic of my own, but want to get lots of it written before posting...so hopefully I'll get something on here eventually! Good Luck with the next chapter! Author's Response: Thank you! I do think the prophecy may have affected Harry's self-esteem in ways that he doesn't even realise. But knowing now that he is the only one who can defeat Voldie, probably does cause him to wonder sometimes if people (read Dumbledore and other adults) really, truly care for him, or if they care more about his role in the war. So I wanted Severus to reassure him on that point.. Yes, I agree totally about Halloween. Even if Harry doesn't really remember his parents very well, you'd think he'd at least reflect on them and their deaths when the date approaches. See, I told you I had a reason for showing that Fleur was good at Potions... I'm thinking her being at Hogwarts next year during the DH year will be important, too. I may even have Bill Weasley play a role at Hogwarts before its over. Harry will still be involved in the DA. As Severus will point out in the next chapter, he was trying to tell Harry that he's going to arrange for him to do a few things with his friends, with Severus there for protection. Oh, I'm glad to hear you're working on a fic! I'm looking forward to it. If you don't mind, I'd love to know what it's about!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like Fleur's role. I'm not sure about how much we'll see of her and Bill, though. Maybe some...
Author's Response: Thank you! Severus does seem to be the kind of person who is 100% committed, once he's made his mind up, and I think that his devotion to Harry is very sweet, too. Harry was pretty upset, but he'll soon realise that Sev and Dumbles are just trying to protect him, and that he was very unfair to Severus.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
This was another good chapter. Your characterization of Severus was great, and he was very in character. Especially at the end. I'm glad he didn't just lose his temper, actually-Comparing being stuck in his presence to prison couldn't have made him very happy... I also like how you have Harry reacting at the end. It was very...teenager-ish. Although I can't say I'd be happy living in one place all the time, either. Overall, very sweet chapter. Waiting for your next update! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you like it! Yes, the 'prison' comment was pretty unfair of Harry, which he will realise in the next chapter and apologise. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you! Severus won't be pleased, to put it mildly. I wouldn't want to be in Umbridge's shoes.
Author's Response: Thanks! Harry is sort of clueless, but it just wasn't one of his better moments...he was really shocked and upset. Of course we'll get to see Harry and Severus work it out...that's the whole point of writing these scenes, isn't it? Yeah, I love caring and gentle Snape, too.
Author's Response: Thank you! Harry has had a tough time, but things are getting better for him. |
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