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Title: Chapter 26 24 Feb 2008 3:20 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A thought just came to me. Do you think Severus is going to adopt Harry in the future of this story? Just wondering, especially after Harry's slip up a few chapters ago.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Will Sev adopt Harry?  You know, I've said all along that their relationship would be unofficial, that Severus would not adopt Harry or become his legal guardian.  But I think I've about changed my mind on that point...
Title: Chapter 26 21 Feb 2008 4:00 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    EEEP! WOnderful! I LOVE it! Poor Sev! and Poor Harry, and Hermione. Aah!
    Please please update soon, I don't think I can stand it!
    *faints*
    -Elise

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah, poor everyone.  I'll update as soon as I can, but I have to work on lesson plans next week.  But I did finish a new chapter of "Slave Child" and am just waiting to hear back from my betas before posting it. 
Title: Chapter 26 19 Feb 2008 6:52 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    i love this one... okay, i have to say this site is bloody brilliant, as i haven't come across a less than satisfactory read up to date... but that's not the point... loved the story! update soon!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!  P&S is an awesome site, isn't it?  I'm really happy you liked it!
Title: Chapter 26 18 Feb 2008 3:58 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Very emotional chapter. And I'm wondering a little about Severus' reaction. It seems to me you are indicating that he is worrying about how Harry will react as he learns more about Severus' actions as a death eater. It appears that in your AU Severus is also responsible for telling the prophecy and he's now afraid of losing Harry.

    Author's Response: Oh, you're good!  That's exactly what I was trying to show.  Severus will struggle the next few weeks over his past actions and the fear of losing the child he's come to love.  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 26 18 Feb 2008 3:57 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, this was a very hard conversation with Hermione. Poor Girl.

    I just loved, loved the conversation and freak out with Harry. That was great, the whole build up and the fit. And how Sev consoled him and was so gentle with him.

    I really like your Snape a lot. I like that he stayed with Harry and assured him he'd be there for him. It was very well done and very heart-warming and angsty all wrapped into a nice bundle. i liked the bit at the end especially that Sev is the one plagued with nightmares. Poor man...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!  Yes, it was hard for Hermione, and I felt badly for her, but it seemed like something the Death Eaters would do..killing the neighbors when they couldn't get to her parents...a petty but unbelievably cruel thing to do.

    I'm so glad you liked Harry's meltdown and Sev's reaction to it.  I do think it was necessary for Harry to let his anger, fear, and grief out before he could truly begin to heal.  Now, things can start to get better for him.  And yeah, Sev's come a long way, hasn't he?  It's such fun to write softie Sev.  And yeah, while Harry's troubles are getting better, now Severus is the one who'll be struggling to come to terms with past events and what they might mean for the future. 

Title: Chapter 26 17 Feb 2008 6:26 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. I'm sorry to hear about your son. I hope he feels better. Thanks for writing this chapter. And i was wondering, do you think Severus will find out about Umbrige (sorry if i misspell anything)soon?
    Thanks again, and GREAT JOB!!
    Nightshade

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, my son is feeling much better now.  Thank heavens for modern medicine!  About Umbridge, well, Sev will find out about her eventually, but not yet.  I'm not entirely happy with how I have put it off...it doesn't seem believable even to me that Severus wouldn't have noticed Harry's scarred hand yet.  He is very observant, and they've become so close.  But I didn't want to put that scene too close to him finding out all about the Dursleys, and now Harry dealing with Sirius' death and his own capture and torture...too much angst too close together, you know.  But it will happen sooner or later!
Title: Chapter 26 17 Feb 2008 4:50 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Harry really needed to vent some of his pain, I was expecting it somehow, but this is so much better than I was even hoping for. Thanks

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry really did need to vent, and it'll do him a lot of good.  I think his nightmares will start to get better now.  If only I could say the same for Severus... 
Title: Chapter 26 17 Feb 2008 9:33 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter. I really felt like I was in the room with Hermione and Ron and Harry and Severus as Hermione and Harry experienced such grief and pain and Ron and Severus tried their best to help them. You are doing a great job showing us readers how much Severus loves Harry, even though the words have never been said.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really appreciate your comments!  Yes, Severus does love Harry, very much, and vice versa.  It'll still be a while, though, before the actual words get said aloud, but I do have that scene planned out already.   

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