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Title: Chapter 29 08 Apr 2008 12:54 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Don't feel too bad about having Harry rush into danger again. I can actually see Harry doing that in the stress of his emotions. He's still a boy. Intellectually he may know that leaving Grimmauld Place wasn't smart, but many of us have problems thinking things through when we're upset.

    And everything turned out OK so maybe this will really help to get the lesson through to Harry to think before he acts.

    Good work.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you don't think it's too unbelievable a stretch.  And you're right, Harry was very upset and needed a little space.
Title: Chapter 29 07 Apr 2008 10:44 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    another grteat chapter, with a lot of emotion from both severus and harry but mainly by harry, harry shouldn't of left hogwarts or tried to escape on a broom, that was very reckless of him but luckily dumbledore came in the nick of time and saved his and severuses life, can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Thank you!  No, Harry shouldn't have left, but he was so upset with Severus and needed to get away.  GP itself was safe...it was leaving on the broom that was the big mistake, but I had to find a way to put Harry in danger so Sev could be injured trying to save him...that was the one thing that I thought would make Harry see that he really does love Severus, no matter his past mistakes.
Title: Chapter 29 07 Apr 2008 9:56 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw... so sweet! I was so worried and after the day I had at work I really needed a lovely new chapter. Thank you!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad if it helped cheer you up!

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