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Title: Chapter 25 05 Feb 2008 11:11 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Whew! Talk about in the nick of time! Poor Hermione.

    Author's Response: It was, wasn't it?  Thanks!  And yeah, poor Hermione, but she still has Harry and Ron, at least.  And it will be a big relief to her to not have to worry about her parents anymore.
Title: Chapter 25 05 Feb 2008 3:58 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I was really glad that Hermione got to stay at Hogwarts. Good 'ol Snape! It was a great display of quick thinking, which he's great at! I'm glad that both Hermione's parents are ok, albeit living in Australia thinking they don't have a daughter who's a witch and have the last name Granger. Hopefully Severus can restore their original memories...he can, right? I seriously hope so! What's up for the next chapter? I can't even beging to guess... But, good luck writing! I can't wait for another update for either PP or Slave Child!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Of course Hermione's not going anywhere...or not yet, anway.  She's going on a Horcrux camping trip next year, but we have to get through this one first!  I wanted both to show that the Grangers were in danger, and to begin having Severus, Ron, and Hermione start building a better relationship, too.  Sev is pretty clever, isn't he?

    As for what's next, well, I could be mean and not tell you...but I will say that Harry is going to let out a lot of his fear and grief and anger. 

     

Title: Chapter 25 05 Feb 2008 4:23 am
Reviewer: MistyMossflower (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, I'm glad that Hermione was able to stay and that her parents are now safe. Keep up the good work. ^_^

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!  Of course, I couldn't make Hermione leave, but I wanted to get her parents out of danger...I always worried about them in the books...I'd have thought the Death Eaters would have targeted them for sure.
Title: Chapter 25 05 Feb 2008 4:03 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a heartbreaking and difficult choice for Hermione. Beautifully done.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It was a really difficult decision for Hermione, but she had to do what she thought would be best for her parents, and fortunately, she made the right choice.  
Title: Chapter 25 05 Feb 2008 3:04 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter as usuall! I'm really glad Hermione will be able to stay at Hogwarts now and still have her parents safe. Seems like Severus saved them just in time too. Great work and I hope you'll find time to update again soon!

    And-congrats on having your story featured!

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  I couldn't split the Trio up now, could I?  And yep, the Grangers got out just in time!  And I am so thrilled about "Potions Professor" being featured!  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 24 04 Feb 2008 3:38 am
Reviewer: MistyMossflower (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooh, what an evil way to end this chapter. lol Anyways, great story and I'm glad that Harry and Severus are getting along now. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next update to find out why Hermione has to leave Hogwarts. ^_^

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you're enjoying it!  I'll try to post the next chapter within a day or two.
Title: Chapter 24 02 Feb 2008 12:55 am
Reviewer: Grym (Signed) [Report This]
    Eeek! Hermione has to leave?! Sorry I've waited to review again only at the end, but I did want to let you know that I'm still enjoying this immensely. From the hurt/comfort relationship between Harry and Severus to the regular visits from other characters we all love, this is moving along nicely. I think that the thing I love most is how you're continuing with JKR's HBP -- incorporating so many elements even after drastically changing Harry and Snape's story. It adds a wonderful tension, a sense of impending danger - especially around Dumbledore. I can't wait to see what you do with it all in the end.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you again!  I'm really glad you like "Potions Professor"!   I have a few quibbles with canon, but for the most part I love JKR's books, and I really wanted to explore what might have happened if Severus and Harry had learned to get along, at some point.  I have to say  that I truly thought she might be setting up some kind of reconciliation between them when she had Sev teach Harry Occlumency (or attempt to) in the fifth book.  So much of Severus' hostility towards Harry is because he confuses Harry with his father.  Of course, he knows that they are two separate people, but he's so blinded by his hatred for James that he sees Harry as being a miniature version, with all of James' flaws. 

    I always thought that if Severus could be made to see that he was wrong, that Harry really wasn't spoiled and conceited like Severus assumes, that they might could have a better relationship.  I really would have liked to have seen that happen, so I decided to try writing it myself. 

     Well, thanks again, and I hope you'll continue to read and enjoy!     

Title: Chapter 1 31 Jan 2008 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Grym (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautifully written. Sharp, professional prose about the characters we love so much, both Snape and Dumbledore ringing utterly true here. Lovely. I'm so happy to have stumbled over this. :) I love the relationship between these two men, Snape's edgy hostility tempered with respect and affection, Dumbledore's weighty hope and his simple request at the end. So many stories have to find complex reasons for Severus to TRY to be nice to Harry that this is inordinately refreshing. Why does he at least try to be kind -- simply because Albus asked. I'll say it again: Beautiful.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm happy you stumbled over it, too, lol!  And yes, I like writing Severus and Dumbledore having a close friendship.
Title: Chapter 24 28 Jan 2008 5:32 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter. And with a cliffie! Hope to find out why Hermione's leaving Hogwarts soon!

    I really like the way you have had the relationship develop between Harry and Severus. You set up the big change in Severus in the very first chapter when you had Dumbledore observing Severus and wondering if anyone else saw the hurt behind the mask - and showing how tender Severus can be with wounded Dumbledore. This keeps Severus from seeming OOC when he opens his heart to Harry - and once he has, becomes fiercely loyal, protective and caring. I love it! Keep the great chapters comin'!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  There'll be more about Hermione's problems in the next chapter or two.  I'm so happy you like how Severus and Harry's friendship has developed.  I do think that Severus is decent at heart, and that a lot of his problems stem from his own abusive past and the fact that he never really learned to relate well to people.  But yes, he is very loyal and commited once he's opened his heart to someone.

    I will probably try to write one more chapter on my new story "Slave Child",  just because it's new and I'd like to get a little more written on it, and then write a couple more chapters on "Potions Professor."  I hope to update "Slave Child" by the weekend, and then get back to "Potions Professor" by the first of next week. 

Title: Chapter 18 28 Jan 2008 5:07 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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