| Title: Chapter 31
| 15 Jun 2008 11:04 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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Also, just wanted to add - I thought Snape crying was the sweetest thing in the world! (;
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought he might really be affected by Harry forgiving him, so I'm glad you approve of it, too!
| Title: Chapter 31
| 15 Jun 2008 11:02 pm
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous)
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I've not been reading this one for a while, and I have to say I loved being able to read several chapters all at once! The adoption was done great! I was really surprised at the idea of Dumbledore simply signing the papers without a long beauricratic rigmarole. That sounded heaven!
Also I loved the line:
"Aw, be fair, Gin. I think that was more because Mum did hers in bright orange and mustard yellow," Ron said.
I thought it was perfect. Your sense of humor is great. And you've got a cute relationship off pat.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the adoption part. I'm really glad I decided to go that route, and yes, all the normal paperwork is a such a pain. I decided that Dumbledore is head of the Wizengamot so I might as well take advantage of that. Thanks again!
Aw! Nice chapter! I enjoyed that one! :)
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I thought the CD thing was fine, it makes the wizarding world a bit more palpable. update soon!
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Of course they would, I mean this is the modern age and stuff like that is around all the time. And in AU, you can give them what you want, remember? I though this chapter was very sweet and I'm so happy for both of them! They deserve to be a family.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, love AUs...they can be very convenient sometimes. I'm glad you liked it. I decided they needed to be a family, too.
Good boy Snape. Being good to Harry like you are, :). I noticed a few places where there were double spaces but not any mistakes.
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Last line rocked, I'm giggleing like a school girl...and although i AM a schoolgirl I DO NOT giggle--usually, lol. Great chappie!
Author's Response: Aw, come on...you know you like a good giggle! Thanks!
Hehe, is Snape is going mad (like he thinks he is) I sure am enjoying it, lol. Characters should go nuts more often, lol.
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Awww! I'm still grinning like an idiot, lol. That was SO sweet Kriteh! You write the mushy stuff great, (snicker). Thank you for this chappie!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do love mush.
Beautiful chapter. I love that Harry is awake. It's cute how Severus isstarting to see Harry differently but pretending not to, lol. Boys will be boys I guess, they never change. :) Great story.
Author's Response: Yes, Severus does have a hard time admitting he was wrong. Thank you!
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