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Title: Chapter 8 06 Oct 2007 6:08 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love the last line! Poor Snape must feel like he really is going crazy. Keep up the excellent writing!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Severus' world is starting to turn upside down, and really, it's going to be a very good thing for him, but just at the moment he's a little bit unsettled by it.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 8 06 Oct 2007 5:05 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    No, Severus, you're not going mad...you're going soft!!

    Great chapter! I really did love the Snape/Harry interaction. Everyone was characterized perfectly. Really good job with Snape countering Harry's thoughts about Ron and Hermione.

    Just a question, in J.K.'s books, dosen't Harry have to stay at the Dursley's until after his birthday? Dosen't he usually spend the last two weeks of summer at the Burrow? So, why did he leave earlier, and how long was he unconscious?

    Write, write, write!!

    Author's Response:

    You know, at this point, I think Severus would prefer to think he's going mad.  Snape and Harry are such fun to write---I'm so happy that I decided to try writing again because I'm having a ball with them!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  To answer your question, I don't have "Half-Blood Prince" with me right now, but I think Harry only stayed at the Dursleys for two weeks that summer and then Dumbledore took him to the Burrow for the rest of the holidays.  I assumed it was because he knew that Harry was grieving for Sirius and was trying to make up to him a little for the terrible year Harry had had in OotP.  I think the Burrow had some extra magical protections around it.  Maybe someone who knows for sure could confirm that?

    In any case, that's why I had Harry at the Burrow earlier too.  Terrible as this sounds, I would have to go back and re-read and count how many days Harry has been awake at this point in my story.  Two or three days, I think?  He was kidnapped just before his birthday, and its now August 10th, so he was unconscious for a about a week or a little longer.

    I'm going to take a day or two off from writing, and then begin chapter 9.  And thanks so much!  I loved reading your reviews!

Title: Chapter 8 06 Oct 2007 1:45 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    A wonderful chapter. I loved every bit of it. Thank you!

    Author's Response: You're welcome!  And thank you for all your reviews!  I really enjoyed this chapter--writing the personal interactions is the fun stuff, and I'm glad you liked it! 
Title: Chapter 7 06 Oct 2007 1:01 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! PLease update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 7 03 Oct 2007 8:07 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Good Chapter! I really liked this one for it's informational aspects. I wonder, though what Dumbledore is hididng... Hmmm. My only hope is that Severus finds out why Harry isn't seeing his friends and denies his fears that they will be hurt; allowing Hermione and Ron to visit against Harry's wishes, they will then agree with Snape. Ok, well, short review. Can't wait for the next installment!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  What Dumbledore knows will eventually be revealed, but it will be a while.  And Severus does indeed have something to do with Harry not being able to break off his friendships--that will probably be in chapter 8. 
Title: Chapter 7 02 Oct 2007 11:56 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! great chapter! Keep em coming!! =)
    muah hahhaha! hes warming up!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it!  Yep, ole Sevvie never's going to be the same again! 
Title: Chapter 7 01 Oct 2007 5:50 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    awww I really liked the ending. I'm glad that Severus is starting to see the way things really happened to for Harry, and will now be at least civil to him, if not actually nice to him. I just hope that Harry will see the light, before it is too late to return the respect. Keep up the awesome work, and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!  And now that he understands what Harry has been through, it will become easier and easier for Severus to empathize with him.  I really do think that Harry can't be blamed too much for his feelings for Severus because after all, Severus began their enmity and he is the adult and bears more responsibility for it than Harry.  But Harry does have a kind, forgiving heart and once he sees that Severus really would like to make amends, he should respond in kind.  
Title: Chapter 7 01 Oct 2007 9:56 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Several hints of things to come and a neat little Snape moment. I loved it!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I love foreshadowing (didn't say I was good at writing it, but I try), and I enjoyed the Snape moment, too!
Title: Chapter 7 01 Oct 2007 8:34 am
Reviewer: em (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ohhhhhhh this is such a treat. Love the story, looking forward to the update.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm really glad you love the story.  It makes my day!
Title: Chapter 7 01 Oct 2007 8:23 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a good chapter! I liked how Snape (although reluctantly) managed to put aside his dislike of Harry to comfort him in the end. Keep up the good writing and update again soon!

    Author's Response: Hi, and thanks!  Severus doesn't actually dislike Harry as much as he thinks he does right now (if that makes any sense).  He just finds it hard to imagine liking him, but it will continue to creep up on him. 

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