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Title: Chapter 4 11 Sep 2007 4:56 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I absolutly love this story! I really didn't know what to expect when I started reading, but it has by far surpassed all my expectations! I don't remember, is this a guardian or just mentor fic? I really hope you keep it as mentor, too many good ones start out awesome but then are ruined by Severus adopting Harry and getting all mushy. But your characterization is right on and brilliant! Can't wait for the next chapter and to see what happens next. Again, your protrayl of Severus is perfect, but I hope that there's some kind of explination as to why Voldermort didn't contact him...isn't he considered as a part o his "inner circle?" I also hope that you don't let Severus get away from Voldermort with just a slap on the wrist. You said that you didn't like writing this chapter, but it was really good and I hope we get Harry's part of the story soon too!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm so happy you're enjoying the story!  It is a guardian fic, but I debated long and hard about whether it should be guardian or mentor.  I'm glad you liked my characterizations, and I hope you will continue to, but I have to admit I do plan on Severus and Harry becoming close.  I love mush, I just can't help it!  Severus will not officially adopt Harry or become his legal guardian, but they will both come to see Severus as a protector and guardian figure.  Although I suppose the mentor category would have worked too, as they will work together and learn from one another.

    There is a reason why Voldemort didn't contact Severus when Harry was captured, and I will touch on it in the next chapter, or possibly chapter 6.  Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 4 11 Sep 2007 4:07 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. Good chapter but... couldn't you have saved Harry before signing off? I mean, sure he's home now but ... I guess I'll head to the Great Hall with the others for something to eat while we wait...

    Author's Response: Sorry for leaving you hanging about Harry's condition, but the next couple of chapters will deal more with his recovery.  Tell Ron and Hermione 'hello' for me if you see them in the Great Hall.  And thank you!
Title: Chapter 4 11 Sep 2007 2:05 pm
Reviewer: Chironstar (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh wow! :) I really, really liked this chapter! So early into the story, and already you have so much action! That's excellent! I loved how the Order rescued Harry, and I loved how Snape took Harry to his rooms for treatment! And the scene with Harry's friends was very touching, and beautifully written, too! Keep up the great work - I look forward to the next chapter! I can't wait to see what happens! Please update soon! :)

    Author's Response: I'm thrilled you liked it!  Action sequences are hard for me, and I'm dancing with joy at the knowledge that you enjoyed it.  I enjoy writing mushy scenes much more so that's something I have to watch out for.  I wanted Harry to have to recover in Snape's quarters because it's so much easier for them to get to know one another with that enforced contact.  Chapter 5 will probably be up this weekend.  Thankyou again!
Title: Chapter 3 11 Sep 2007 6:59 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Great chapter! Poor, poor Harry! I hope that someone saves him! I wonder how Harry connected his mind to Snape's. I really enjoyed Snape's thoughts at the beginning of this chapter.

    Well done! Now I have to eagerly wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Jan!  Poor Harry indeed.  I think he's got a rough year ahead of him, although I think he would say it was worth it in the end.  As for the mind connection, there is a reason for it, although I'm not sure how good a reason it really is, and it will left rather vague for a time.  Glad you liked Snapey!
Title: Chapter 3 09 Sep 2007 2:09 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! PLease update soon!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I will try to post the next chapter as soon as I can!
Title: Chapter 3 08 Sep 2007 6:55 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved this chapter and the build up of tension.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you liked it!
Title: Chapter 3 08 Sep 2007 12:37 pm
Reviewer: Chironstar (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the way this story is progressing - your characterisations are great, and you keep the pace and tension at just the right level to keep the reader on their toes! I can't wait to read more! Poor Harry - always dealing with DEs and their sadistic tortures. *huggles him* The mind link with Snape is really interesting, and I really want to see how it will progress! You are doing a wonderful job so far (I also think you did a great job with this chapter, too), please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so, so much!  I have been very nervous about getting into writing again--I wrote a good bit in the SW fandom, but that's been a few years ago, and I wasn't sure at all if I could still write anything worthwhile.  So your kind words are very encouraging for me!

    And yes, poor Harry--he does have it rough, but where would we be without the DEs to provide some action?  And with the DEs, you can continue the story after DH.  After all, Dumbledore said some of them were almost as bad as Voldy himself (and personally, I think I might rather face Voldy than Bellatrix), and some of them are bound to still be on the loose.  

    I'm glad you like the mind link--it will come into play later as well.  Thanks again!   

Title: Chapter 3 08 Sep 2007 9:27 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, exciting ending! I loved the mind connection. I can't wait to see Harry rescued. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked the mind connection--I wasn't sure about it, but I thought of a couple of other scenes in the future where the mind connection will come into play again.  I'm quite ambitious and have a whole trilogy planned, lol-- this one, an AU of "Deathly Hallows" with Snape helping Harry, and an AU of the year after DH.  I just hope I haven't bitten off more than I can chew!  
Title: Chapter 3 08 Sep 2007 6:36 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    How is it that Snape can tell where Harry is from that temporary connection they just shared? Good chapter and I hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  And Snape can tell where Harry is because he recognized the room with the dais and the throne-like chair.  He's been there before at DE meetings.  I'll try to get ch. 4 asap.
Title: Chapter 2 08 Sep 2007 12:53 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story!!! Please update soon!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Chapter 3 should be up tonight or tomorrow.

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