Oh no! Run, Harry, run! Oh, wait...you can't. Come back, Snape, come back!
Author's Response: Heh, heh. Don't worry, the kidnapped portion of the story won't last too long. Thanks for reviewing!
Pretty good start to this story so far. I knew once Fletcher was on duty, something bad was going to happen. I'm very curious to see where this story goes and I hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Fletcher is like a bad luck charm, isn't he? Or worse. I'll try to update again soon!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 04 Sep 2007 1:07 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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good story. but you need to get your spells straight.
Author's Response: Thank you! As for the spells, I'm not an expert on them, but I'll try.
Ooh, I'm curious to see where this goes! I love Snape watches over Harry fics, but I'm worried about the kidnapping warning...
I like your characterizations so far. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll sure try. And the kidnapping portion will be in the chapter 3, but Harry will be rescued in chapter 4 so it won't last too long.
Sounds like it's going to be a pretty good story. Good idea, good writing. I'm anxious for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to write on a regular schedule. I'll do my best.
Great start. Happy to see a new story. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm happy to be here!
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