Fleur is mary sue-ish? Are you sure because I'm enjoying her having brains instead of just being arm candy for Bill. You gave her something to do rather then sit there prettily and talk with a french accent. Really enjoying the long chapters, you rock! The end was sad, Albus, you need to watch what you say around Severus. You hurt his feelings, :(
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I wanted Fleur to be more than a pretty face. If she was her school's champion it only makes sense for her to have some brains and talent, too. But I can see why she could be considered a Mary Sue, too. It almost makes her too perfect. But since she's a very minor character here, I decided maybe it didn't matter.
| Title: Chapter 31
| 04 Jun 2008 10:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Like i have said before this is one of my favorite stories, and you did a great job. Please update again soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
great christmas for both harry and severus and i'm glad they each liked there presents and i quite agree about cd players at hogwarts, i don't know how they cope at hogwarts without cds
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, it seems natural all those kids would want to listen to music sometimes, doesn't it?
Recovery time soon? I hope Harry's not mental, :( That would just be horrible!
Thank you for writing this story I'm enjoying it muchly, :P
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Recovery time coming up!
Severus to the rescue! I'm so gleeful, lol. I love the way you write, very exciting. I loved reading about the Order even though it was just a little bit about them.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Action scenes are harder for me so I'm really glad you liked this part!
Oh No! Harry, why did you go and get caught. Tsk, tsk. Great job, I love the way you portray the characters. And the angst is lovely, :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Heh, angst and mush are my specialties!
Awwww this is a great chapter! Lots of good warm mushy stuff! :) You do a fantastic job writing about emotions, and I can totally picture Severus and Harry doing their gift exchange. You rock Kristeh!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do love writing the emotional stuff. I'm really happy you enjoyed it!
| Title: Chapter 31
| 04 Jun 2008 5:48 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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YAY for Christmas fluff! I can't wait to get to Christmas with my story now. LOL I'm glad Harry has a father now and that both of them are so happy, and even more happy that Harry's friends are okay with all the changes. Harry is truly a very lucky kid. Thanks for a fun read this morning, Kristeh!
Author's Response: Thank you! I can't wait for a Lily's Charm Christmas, either...it ought to be wonderful! Yes, Harry is pretty lucky right now. I wanted to give him a chance to be happy...he's had to endure so many bad things before.
Beautiful Kristeh, I read part of this story like a year ago and I've just gotten back to it. (Shameful I know). It's even better then I remembered, lol. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
| Title: Chapter 30
| 26 May 2008 4:35 am
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| Reviewer: Kaylee Snape (Anonymous)
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I would just like to say that I started reading this story a few hours ago, and I kept reading till now--it's awesome! I love your writing style and the way that you capture everyone's style of speech so well. Snape's snarkiness isn't diminished by his love for Harry, and Dumbledore still sounds old and wise, and Harry is the perfect teenager. You are fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really love the characters, and try to keep them IC as much as possible...though I guess sometimes I do let myself get carried away with mushiness, but that's all part of the fun. Thank you again, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy it!
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