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Title: Chapter 30 20 May 2008 3:32 pm
Reviewer: lisas_castle (Signed) [Report This]
    Chapter 5 ;)

    I loved this chapter! A great heart-to-heart, and now Harry has a dad! WTG Harry for using Sev's own words against him to get him to understand why Harry forgives him.

    Good luck on finishing up the school year! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It's finally summer, and I'm so happy!  I've celebrated by writing two chapters for SC, but now I'm ready to get back to PP.  I did enjoy letting Harry use Sev's words to him, and I'm really glad I listened to my readers and decided to let Severus adopt Harry.  I think it's going to be fun writing them as father and son. 
Title: Chapter 30 14 May 2008 2:53 am
Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story! I just found it, and spent half the night reading it (*sigh*, now i have only 4.5 hours sleep left). I can't wait for the next chapter...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story (and hope you got caught up on your sleep!).  I'm going to try to update this one again this weekend!
Title: Chapter 30 13 May 2008 3:49 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! I loved this part and I don't think it's out of character at all for Sev to cry, he does cry in mine as well, if you read Never Again or Hide Yourself Away. It'a normal reaction when faced with such emotion and it shows how strong he is as a man. I like it better when he cries, it makes him seem more human. Loved the last line too!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, I think Severus actually feels very deep emotions; he's just very good at keeping them hidden a lot of the time...probably because of the way he was raised.  But everyone has a point where it can overwhelm them, and it happened here.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 30 12 May 2008 10:24 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, i'm glad harry and severus have sorted out there differences and harry got adopted and i do hope that harry does learn from his mistakes

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it, and Harry will learn...as I said, his actions were really just because I couldn't think of another way to get Severus injured defending him at this point, but I'm not sure Harry would have actually run off like that...I hope he'd have more sense, but then again, we all do silly things sometimes without thinking about the consequences.   Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 30 12 May 2008 8:42 pm
Reviewer: SnowStalker (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow!! Another wonderful chapter! I don't think Severus was too OOC in this chapter, considering how he'd worked himself up over what Harry's reaction might be, and then being badly injured (which tends to make people a little more emotional anyway), and then finally Harry's forgiveness...I agree that he would have been completely overwhelmed. *grins* I love the adoption, and the way you referenced the end of chapter 5 with Dumbledore's comment was just awesome! It made me laugh. Thanks so much for the great chapter! Please update again soon!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  That's what I was thinking, too, about how Severus would be very touched by Harry's forgiveness.  I'm so glad you liked it all!
Title: Chapter 30 12 May 2008 4:21 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    So sweet! I almost got teary eyed too. Great ending to the chapter though with Dumbledore's comment! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked DD's comment. I had that planned way back from the beginning, and it's been hard to wait through 25 chapters to get to use the punch line!
Title: Chapter 30 12 May 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I personally don't worry about characters being OOC if the author has had the character change believably -- which you did. Severus didn't come to love Harry in a ridiculously short period of time or without Severus fighting the change a bit.

    So thanks for another good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I hoped it would be believable!
Title: Chapter 30 11 May 2008 9:39 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    YOU UPDATED AND DID A WONDERFUL JOB ASWELL!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!! I LOOKE FORWARD TO THE NEXT ONE.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I'm almost done with the next chapter on SC, and then I'm going to work on PP, probably this weekend!
Title: Chapter 30 11 May 2008 7:55 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Terrific chapter, so full of love! I really enjoyed it. Loved Dumbledore's comments, too, you do him well.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Kim!  I appreciate it!
Title: Chapter 30 11 May 2008 6:24 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought this was an incredibly sweet chapter! You made me get a lump in my throat several times during Severus' and Harry's conversations. Very touching. I am perfectly okay within the context of your story that Severus was OOC. I could see him easily overwhelmed at Harry's forgiveness. Harry's reply about "remember what you told me about Sirius?" and taking his turn to comfort Severus was so heartwarming.

    And that last line "when hell freezes over" was a hoot and a half. Naturally, I don't remember which chapter it was but it gives me a terrific excuse to go back and reread my favorite chapters!

    Thanks for the new chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Cathy!  Thank you!  I thought Harry's forgiveness would be overwhelming to Sev, too.  He's blamed himself so bitterly for so many years, and he's been so worried about losing Harry.  Thanks again! 


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