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Title: Chapter 29 08 May 2008 2:44 am
Reviewer: sparky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was really good. I didn't even mind the part about Harry leaving GP too much; I suppose he would have been really upset and not thinking entirely rationally.
    I can't wait to see where you take this next - please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I've gotten a little behind on this one...I'd planned to update it already, but real life has been pretty busy.  My kids have have needed help with studying for end-of-year tests, and other end-of-school activities and I've had to put writing on hold for the past few days.  But I'm going to work on PP again tonight, and hopefully the next chapter will be done soon!  Glad you're liking it!  
Title: Chapter 29 13 Apr 2008 5:54 pm
Reviewer: SeverussssS (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, loved the ending of it.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  The ending was fun to write.
Title: Chapter 29 09 Apr 2008 12:29 am
Reviewer: lisas_castle (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, even your "lack of imagination" chapters turn out well! I could easily see somebody doing what Harry did - getting so mad at a parental figure and running out, even when he's in danger. Especially a teenager who's been through so much. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I hoped it might work...Harry is under a lot of stress there, and maybe not thinking things through as well as he should, but we all are guilty of that sometimes, right?
Title: Chapter 29 08 Apr 2008 6:58 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    2 thumbs up! I think leaving GP is right in tune with canon Harry, when overwhelmed by emotions...
Title: Chapter 29 08 Apr 2008 6:58 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    2 thumbs up! I think leaving GP is right in tune with canon Harry, when overwhelmed by emotions...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I hoped it might not be too unbelievable.
Title: Chapter 29 08 Apr 2008 6:02 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved the ending too! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you did!
Title: Chapter 29 08 Apr 2008 2:47 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't have a problem with Harry leaving GP, but I do have a problem with Sirius' room still having Gryffindor posters. ;-) I don't think that his parents would have left anything Gryffindor behind if they were willing to eradicate his name from the tapestry. As always, you managed to do a great job making me cry.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  You know it's funny; the part about Sirius' bedroom is actually canon.  I re-read the description of his room in DH before writing this chapter so I could describe it accurately.  It says that he had Gryffindor banners and Muggle posters of girls in bikinis stuck on his walls with Permanent Sticking Charms so his parents couldn't remove anything.  I'm sure glad my own kids can't put things up with Permanent Sticking Charms...there's no telling what my house would look like!  Thanks again!

     

Title: Chapter 29 08 Apr 2008 2:37 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter and I think it fits in with harry's impulsiveness plus there's nothing like nearly losing the one you love to put the past in perspective, where it belongs.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, that's exactly what I thought, too!
Title: Chapter 29 08 Apr 2008 2:16 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    aww well that ending produced a few tears. I'm such a softie. It'll be intresting to see Severus' reaction to Harry's actions when he is well and fully able to scream at him. LOL. Great chapter you can really sense how remorseful Severus is of his past actions and it's great to see Harry be so forgiving. Keep up the awesome work and please please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I do think Severus and Harry still need to talk more about Severus' past, and they will.  You know, Harry has always seemed very forgiving to me.  I really would have liked to have seen him and Severus reconcile in canon.  I think if Severus had only made half an effort Harry would have more than met him. 

    I read a discussion once where people were theorizing that Snape was always so mean to Harry not so much because Harry reminded him of James, but that Harry reminded him of his own worst mistake and made him feel so guilty for his part in Lily's death and in ruining Harry's life.  I thought that was kind of interesting and wondered if there was some truth to that.

Title: Chapter 29 08 Apr 2008 1:17 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS FOR WRITING!!!!! AS ALWAS, I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATE!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you liked it!

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