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Title: Chapter 27 04 Mar 2008 11:38 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Severus-Harry bonding mush. Nicely done.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  You just can't beat Sev-Harry bonding mush, in my book.
Title: Chapter 27 04 Mar 2008 7:25 pm
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awwww, I love you last line! Perfect way to end this chapter...or half chapter as the case may be :) I'm so glad you've finally updated, and such a wonderful update it was! Can't wait for chapter 28! Keep up the amazing work!
    :-D

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it!  It was fun to write.
Title: Chapter 27 04 Mar 2008 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this line: "And you would look good scrubbing cauldrons for the next six months," Great chapter and please update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try to post again soon!
Title: Chapter 27 04 Mar 2008 4:41 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww...and the warm fuzzies abound! I adore this chapter!

    It was good to see Harry taking care of Severus instead of the other way around. It's just nice to get those feelings from Harry every once and a while.

    And I loved the conversation about Severus' clothes. You are too funny! Although I really am curious...when do we find out what Harry gets everyone for Christmas?!

    And what about Severus' dream? Do we get his point of view in the second half of the chapter? I'm really curious to see what it was about!

    And YAY for Harry finally having a parent figure! (Even though he's still quite hesitant about what their relationship means, that certain uncertainty, it really keeps him in character!) It's good that Severus seems to realize it too, that man is turning into a softie and I love it!!

    Great job on this and thanks for updating sooner! It truly was just what I needed this morning!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm glad to see you again!  How's your fic coming along?  It was fun to write Harry being a bit of a caretaker here, and if you liked it, you'll be happy to know that I've got a couple of other scenes planned where Harry will be the one taking care of and comforting Severus...one later in "Potions Professor" and one for the Deathly Hallows AU.  Christmas is coming soon.  Everytime I say something will be in the next chapter, I end up not writing it in that chapter after all, so I'll just say it's coming soon.  The more interesting question might be what does Severus get Harry for Christmas, though.

    About Sev's nightmare, well, it's really not meant to be a big mystery, though Severus won't share it with Harry for a while.  But remember the day before, he had told the Trio about DEs killing Hermione's neighbors, including a young couple with a baby boy, and the kids were talking about how horrible and cruel the DEs were...it just might have brought back some memories Severus would rather forget.

    Yeah, I'm so happy Harry and Severus have reached this point in their relationship.  I love softie Sev.  Glad you liked it!

Title: Chapter 27 04 Mar 2008 3:35 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww warm fuzzies--I love it! Love the way these two interact here, it's so realistic.

    I also like how you've prtrayed the Defense lesosns and how Sev explains why practice is so important when doing something dangerous! Practice makes perfect!! This is exactly what i stress when I write similar scenes in my fics.

    Loved the bit about the black clothes, funny but that was the reason i called my story Some Good Guys Wear Black and made similar comments in it1 LOL!

    The ending lines were great too, so beautiful! One of my favs & update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I enjoyed writing about the Defense lessons, and yep, there's just no substitute for practice.  Sev knows that Harry will have to face Voldemort again one day, and he is determined that Harry will be prepared for it.  I've seen your story, and it looks interesting.  I'll try to read it, but might not have a chance before the weekend. 
Title: Chapter 27 04 Mar 2008 2:18 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww. Warm fuzzy alert, Kristeh. Yay! I was wishing last night for an update. I loved this chapter. I love that Harry was taking care of Severus, letting him sleep and keeping his food warm. It was really all very sweet.

    I love the little joking between but also that Harry is still insecure when he has to ask, "Do you really wish that I'd..." That was wonderful, that insecurity.

    And I loved too that Severus comes over to reassure him and that his eyes are filled with emotion. So wonderful. Teared me up there a bit.

    And now Harry is really realizing what Sev means to him! And that Sev is just like a parent. I'm so happy. Great chapter. Thanks! :o)

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, a definite warm fuzzy alert here.  I'm so glad you liked it.  And I think Harry can be a great caretaker, too.  I think, short as this chapter is, it's one of my favorites, just because I can see how far Harry and Severus have come.  That they're able to joke around with one another is a small miracle, if you consider all the years of animosity that lay between them at the end of fifth year, so I just loved writing them kidding one another.  Still, as you pointed out, Harry does have some lingering insecurities, because he was truly unwanted by the Dursleys and because they drilled it into him that he was a burden that no one could possibly want, that's a very sensitive issue with him.  Even now, after all this time, he still couldn't be absolutely sure that Sev was joking about that, but it does show progress that he was able to let Severus know he was insecure and didn't just bottle it up and brood about it.

    There's still one more big hurdle in the road before Harry and Severus can truly accept themselves as parent and child, and that will be coming up pretty soon after Christmas, I think.

    Thanks so much, OE! 

Title: Chapter 27 04 Mar 2008 2:00 pm
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the interaction between them in this chapter! I look forward to the next part.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really loved writing this chapter...it's such fun to show Harry and Sev being all warm and fuzzy towards one another.
Title: Chapter 27 04 Mar 2008 1:42 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    What a perfect way to start the day! That was an amazingly heartwarming chapter. I love how you had Severus train Harry without pain (beyond boredom) and then actually tell him why it was important to he, Snape, that he do so. The clothing conversation was too cute. The reaction to it was just perfect. Now I can face the world today with a bit more love in my heart than this headache might have allowed me earlier.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Kim!  I'm so happy you liked it!  This chapter was a lot of fun to write because I do enjoy the mushy scenes.  I really wanted to show Severus working hard to train Harry, but at the same time, being very determined not to hurt him.  Most of the fics I've read, if Harry is learning any new magical techniques, will show them being at least a bit painful, and Harry getting bruised or sore, or sometimes enduring real pain, in learning them.  And I understand the thinking, the 'no pain, no gain' thoughts, but to me, it also seems equally likely that Severus, once he's close to Harry and knows how much he's suffered in the past, would do his best to find a pain-free way of instructing him, or at least ways to minimize it.

    The clothing conversation was fun to write, too.  I wonder if Harry really will get Sev some outlandish clothes as a gift...could be interesting.  I hope your headache got better and you had a great day, too! 

     

Title: Chapter 26 24 Feb 2008 3:20 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A thought just came to me. Do you think Severus is going to adopt Harry in the future of this story? Just wondering, especially after Harry's slip up a few chapters ago.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Will Sev adopt Harry?  You know, I've said all along that their relationship would be unofficial, that Severus would not adopt Harry or become his legal guardian.  But I think I've about changed my mind on that point...
Title: Chapter 26 21 Feb 2008 4:00 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    EEEP! WOnderful! I LOVE it! Poor Sev! and Poor Harry, and Hermione. Aah!
    Please please update soon, I don't think I can stand it!
    *faints*
    -Elise

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah, poor everyone.  I'll update as soon as I can, but I have to work on lesson plans next week.  But I did finish a new chapter of "Slave Child" and am just waiting to hear back from my betas before posting it. 

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