Potions and Snitches
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Reviews For Emerald Eyes
Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 11:11 pm
Reviewer: Vintage (Signed) [Report This]
    That was amazing. I loved that!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 8:52 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it, great start for your first post. I love your descriptions of Severus and the flashbacks with Harry relating to what had happened when he was younger. I would love to see this continue or another story related to it. Keep writing, and update and post again soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review! I was trying to make a distinction between Snape's justification for his reprimand and Vernon's...well, lack of it.

Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 8:10 pm
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well done. A very credible Snape. Now wouldn't it be interesting if Snape was to catch Harry and Ron impersonating Crabb and Goyle, as a direct result of what was stolen from his storeroom during the cauldron incident? And like any careful Potions Master and spy, Snape would already have figured out what was stolen from his stores and why.....

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, that would be interesting...  *ponders*
Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 6:25 pm
Reviewer: Matilda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lovely story. I love that Snape is a sucker for Harry's eyes. I think you've characterized both Harry and Snape really well. My favorite part was when Harry saw the disappointment in Snape's face, and that's what made him cry. Great job! You should definitely write more fics.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I was a bit nervous about the whole crying scene, wondering if it was over-the-top, but it seems to have worked out.  *sigh of relief*  Glad you enjoyed it. 
Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 2:37 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it. I allready told you that though and everything I really liked about this fic so I won't repeat it. Though I would like to see it continued. :)

    Really glad you posted it and I hope you get tons of reviews.

    Author's Response: Continuing it might be fun.  Thanks again for previewing before I posted.  I'm glad you liked it :)
Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 1:48 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought it was very good and complete.

    Author's Response: Complete is good.  lol.  And like I said, I had meant to add more to the chapter, but thought I should just get it over with and post.  I appreciate your positive feedback :)
Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 12:16 pm
Reviewer: Azuredragon (Signed) [Report This]
    *Squeeee* Yay! I like it. I like it a lot ^v^ Sevy sees Lily in Harry.

    I'm glad you decided to cave and posted it hun, this is a great little fic. Lol

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I don't really have much confidence in myself as a writer, I guess.  My hands were sweating so bad as I posted this last night.  lol.  Thanks again for your kind words :)
Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 10:29 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great! looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Thanks :)
Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 8:53 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    I laughed about the 'look at me' thing in the author's note. Congrats for being brave and posting, it would be nervewrecking.

    That was great, I enjoyed it. I really liked the way you described the emotions, especially why Harry was crying and then Snape's surprise at the end. I would really be quite interested in how the detentions go, if you were thinking of continuing the story.

    Author's Response: Hmm...a continuation.  I never really gave it thought, but I suppose it could turn into a mentor ordeal.  lol.  And the "look at me" line was one of the reasons I hesitated to post.  After I read Deathly Hallows, I thought...huh...the originality of my story has just been shot to pieces.  lol.  Thank you for the review!  I appreciate it :)
Title: Chapter 1 25 Sep 2007 8:32 am
Reviewer: validego (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that was very well written. I felt genuinely bad for Harry when he felt shame, but it was right in this case. A good point in this story is how much more painful seeing disappointment from someone can be versus anger. And everyone was in character too. You write well, you should definitely keep it up if you have any ideas. And if you don’t, do a challenge! Thanks for posting this.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!  I'm a HUGE fan of your story, so a review such as yours is quite flattering :)

    I'm actually gaining more confidence every minute as a writer, so I'll be sure to post some more stories.  I've actually written a Harry/Sirius fic that I'm planning on posting at ff.net in the next couple of days.  You can read it if you want.  *nudge nudge* lol.

    Thanks again for your thoughtful review.  I really appreciate it. 


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