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Reviews For Lily's Charm
I realize that is an understatement, but nothing else seems quite appropriate, either. Great chapter. Those poor guys, though...
Author's Response: What is NOT wrong with Draco! LOL I'm glad you enjoyed the emotions. Get ready for more! :oP
Engenue Author's Response: Thanks! I love cliffhangers; they are fun, aren't they? I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. The next chapter will be up in a couple days, I think.
One of the things that always stood out to me in JKR's book is how bitter Snape is. Of course, the last book explained why he was such a bitter man. Unrequited love will do strange things to people. Of course, in your story it's more a case of a sense of betrayal that makes Snape so bitter. It is so sad to think that at one point Harry was the world to Snape, and now, whenever he looks at Harry all he sees is that betrayal again. Poor Harry and poor Snape. Dumbledore is absolutely maddening, isn't he? I don't know how Snape is able to control himself, but I guess it has something to do with the fact that he undeniably respects the headmaster. I'm glad that Harry found a way to share the pensieve memories with Snape. I wonder if that's enough for Snape, or if he will need more proof? Thanks so much for the update. BTW, thanks for letting Ron be so understanding of the situation. I would have hated it if he was mean to Harry just because of Snape being his father. The poor kid has enough to be worrying about, doesn't he? Take care and hope to hear more from you soon.... Author's Response: Yeah, it always drives me batty when people take forever to update too so I thought I'd be kind. :-) Actually, I just can't wait either to find out what is going to happen next. Poor Snape and Harry, yeah. Snape is just a really tragic figure, isn't he? I love that you are thinking about Snape's reactions throughout the books based on this fic. You hit it right on the head too. Sad, is right. Dumbledore is annoying, for sure. Snape, I think has a lot of control. I think it takes a lot for him to lose himself completely. It's happened twice so far in this story and there's more to come. After all, he doesn't know if the Headmaster knew Lily lied, yet. I don't like it when Ron is portrayed as a complete arse, so I let him be a good friend, this time. Harry needs his friends for everything that s happening. The next chapter will be up in a couple days, though this one will proably be shorter than normal as it has some very important things happening but not long things. Thanks so much for another review. Enjoy.
Author's Response: LOL! Good to know I take precedence of your papers. :-) Warm fuzzies for you. I'm so glad you still like it. More will be up in a few days.
One thing that I noticed, though. McGonagall teaches Transfiguration, not Charms. Does she have any idea what's going on? And Draco, I'm dissapointed in that toe rag! What a jerk, that Slytherin!! Urgh! (I hope Harry hexes him in the next chapter!) But wow! I can't wait to see into Severus' mind in the next chapter, he's going to be really confused trying to figure everything out while determining what he believes is true. Hopefully he does see that he IS Harry's father and totally A.K.s his mum is she's still alive. Man, she's mean! It would also be really good for Harry, obviously, if Severus accepts him...even if he's already been rejected. But, that's a good thing too, because it'll make Severus try REALLY hard to gain Harry's trust and thus prove to him that he wants to be his father. Although Voldie does prove difficult to deal with...hmmm. I bet you've got a great plot bunny to skirt around that one, though! I'm also looking forward to some agnst from Harry, after his rejection. It's going to be hard on him and I hope that Ginny get's a bigger part in this... Well, off to class! Keep writing! Author's Response: Oh! Thanks for the note about McGonagall. I did that in the other chapter too but I changed it now. I'm so glad you liked the way Snape sort of lost it at the end there and that you were pleasantly surprised by it. It's nice to know I've got something spot on! Draco is a git, isn't he? But, we do have plans for him. Next chapter is chock full of Sev's thoughts and it's entitled "Consequences" so it's gonna be fun. I'm so glad you are looking forward to it so much. And yeah, Eileen is a little *****, it's she? :-) Lots more Ginny too. After all, Harry wouldn't be Harry without Ginny! Love her. Thanks for the reveiw!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it. The next chapter is in the works and will be up in a few days. You'll have to wait and see what old Sev is up to! :o) |
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