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Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 14 Jul 2023 2:17 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Retribution felt fitting in this instance. Good for Severus. I’m looking forward to the talk ahead.
Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 15 Aug 2010 9:08 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the way Snape elected to punish his mother, the foul harpy. No mother should willingly be the source of so much pain and anguish to their child.

    Well writ.
Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 24 Jul 2009 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    He let his mother off easy. I hope she realizes it in a lucid moment. Things could have been alot worse for her.
Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 21 Apr 2008 4:46 am
Reviewer: Le Skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ... I don't think hearts have "orifices".... Otherwise, great chapter - very powerful writing.

    Author's Response: Actually there is an orifice that leads into the aorta from the lower left chamber of the heart, but that's besides the point. :oP  Orifice can mean opening and I was trying to illustrate that all the parts of his heart are being filled...all the openings that had been empty.  And I tend to take the idea of poetic license pretty seriously.  ;o)  Glad you enjoyed the power of the chapter.  This was a really fun one to write.  Thanks for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 28 Feb 2008 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Severus! Loooved this chappie! Lol, :)

    Author's Response: I do too.  Thanks!  It's one of my favorites.  Go Sevvie, indeed!  LOL
Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 08 Dec 2007 7:58 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ah, revenge is sweet but what revenge will Harry get for five year of abuse from Severus? For once I would like to see Sev crawl on the floor begging forgiveness.

    Author's Response: Now, that would be something to see!  Thanks for reviewing.  The next chapter should be up by tomorrow night!
Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 07 Dec 2007 6:46 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, great chapter! I can't wait for the dreaded father-son meeting that's coming up next!! Angst Away!

    I'm really glad that Severus did think of Harry before he went and A.K.ed his mother. She didn't deserve to die, but to suffer as he did for her schemes. (Wow, I'm scared of myself now!) But Severus really did handle himself well. I'm certainly glad that he's decided to try and be a father to Harry, if not just out of his love for Lily. But hopefully soon, he'll find that he never stopped loving that messy little kid, either.

    I really liked how he reacted, both in 1981 and 1996. Your characterization is amazing and spot-on! I just love this Snape and all the agnst that he has to deal with. I'm also glad that Eileen is alive, for I wondered in chapters past if she had died...but now she wishes that she were dead I bet!

    Keep writing! I just can't wait to see how Harry reacts to Severus coming back!! YAY!

    Author's Response:

    Okay, I just had to laugh when you wrote, "but now she wishes that she were dead I bet".  Don't know why really except I think I scare myself too.  I just LOVED having Eileen tortured for what she had done.  Sick, aren't we?  :o)

    So much angst coming up in the next chapter!  I just love how everyone loves angst  so much.  It's so fun to write. 

    Thanks so much for the compliments about the characterizations of Sev in the two time periods.  It was good to have the split chapter and so much fun.  

    Thanks for reviewing again.  The next chapter should be up before the weekend ends.  Enjoy.

Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 07 Dec 2007 5:22 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Well written. It makes sense that Snape wouldn't blame Lily and that he'd even believe that he had never really been worthy of her. It's particularly sad that as a young man he'd thought he had a son who loved him, only to "discover" that he wasn't really his son. I know you said in the Author's Note about Harry needing resolution, but I think Snape needs Harry as well. It's so easy for either of them to believe they aren't worthy of love.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. 

    I'm so happy that you "got" the 1981 chapter with Severus so well.  I was using it for some part to try and explain why Severus didn't even fight against what Lily was saying to him...it was just so easy for him to believe that Lily would eventually reject him.  :( 

    And yes, Severus does need resolution just as much, if not a bit more than Harry as he's been suffering with this for so many years.  And, he'll explore his fear of rejection from Harry just as much as Harry will worry about the same attitude from Snape.  Tangled, tangled emotions and so very much angst.  :o)

Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 07 Dec 2007 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think she got just what she deserved! Keep up the great work.

    Author's Response: Yes, Eileen definitely did deserve what she got.  Thanks for the review!  I hope you keep enjoying. 
Title: Chapter 11: Consequences 07 Dec 2007 2:18 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes you're correct, I am anxious but I know you're leading to it so I can deal with it. Hope the next chapter is up soon!

    Author's Response: The next chapter should be up before weekend's end.  This one is shaping up to be a long one so it will take more time than the last shorter one.  Thanks so much for another review.  I know your anxious, but really it makes me smile that people are so into the story.  :o)

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