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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 14 Jul 2023 11:06 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, that logic in your author’s note feels spot on. And your delivery on that is superb.
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 27 Mar 2022 9:26 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    I agree 100% with your note. Harry Potter was created solely for the severitus fanfiction that comes after.
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 16 Aug 2010 12:12 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm... what is happening with Malfoy, I wonder?

    Good chapter. I especially liked the section near the end. Well done!
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 25 Jul 2009 8:22 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *giggles* Loved the end of that chapter. And your right, Harry does seem to be forgiving. Ah where did I here it? 'Kind to a fault'. Seems like something Sev would say.
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 24 Apr 2008 8:53 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Ginny and Harry Sitting in a tree...

    Author's Response: ROFL  I love those two!  :o)
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 02 Mar 2008 5:46 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Man, when I read this chapter I was transported out of my yellow bedroom and I forgot about wanting to kill the neighbors dog because it hasn't shut up in the longest, and suddenly I was in the dark and dreary potions classroom. Giggling madly at Harry's expense with Draco Malfoy! (He's so cute) Blushing for Harry, and smiling at the perfect end! This was eithier one of the best chapters ever or I've finally gone insane. I'm hoping for the first one, Lol.
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: LOL  Glad you liked it!  I do have to agree that's it's just the best chapter ever choice.  Hee hee.   LOL  I love that you're laughing at Harry.  That's funny! 
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 17 Dec 2007 9:19 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, here's the second part of my review for this chapter. I'm not sure sure if I've said this before, but I love your Remus. He is so full of wisdom, even more so than the headmaster, if you ask me. He truly seems to understand people and the fact that he's pegged Snape so well is proof enough.

    I loved the fact that Snape was so obviously upset/concerned about the whole bllod quill thing. I think that he would be upset if that had happened to any student, but the fact that it was Harry just made him even angrier. Imagine how he will be when and if he finds out the true extent of the Dursley's treatment of Harry.

    Anyway, great chapter. It was kind of nice to read it in two parts. That way I could savor it a bit more. But, now I'm on to read the next chapter. It must be my lucky day. Thanks for the update...

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the chapter.  The whole blood quill scene was totally inspired by my watching OOTP.  I actually had to stop the movie to get it out really quick.  Hee hee. 

    Remus is one of my favs as well.  He's gonna be in the next chapter quite prominently as well so hope you'll enjoy that.  Thanks for reviewing again! 

Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 14 Dec 2007 7:50 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    First off, what a cute mental picture of little Harry playing with plastic frogs in a small cauldron while his Daddy makes potions.

    It's funny to think that even back then that Severus wasa little jealous of Remus. But I love the fact that Harry loves his Remus so. Don't we all? In fact, I think in canon he is my second favorite character, after Harry, of course.

    I love Remus' line "He deserves better from you." Isn't that so true? But, then again, I would say that Severus deserved so much better from his own mother, too.

    Wow! And then, Remus' line of "And you do not go far enough." That was awesome. That man sure does have a way with words.

    I just got home from work (I work night shift/12 hour shifts so I'm a bit tired), so I'm going to post this review right now, even though I've only read about half of this chapter. I'll read the rest later and post another review for the rest of the chapter. I'm loving it so far. Thanks...
Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 14 Dec 2007 7:50 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    First off, what a cute mental picture of little Harry playing with plastic frogs in a small cauldron while his Daddy makes potions.

    It's funny to think that even back then that Severus wasa little jealous of Remus. But I love the fact that Harry loves his Remus so. Don't we all? In fact, I think in canon he is my second favorite character, after Harry, of course.

    I love Remus' line "He deserves better from you." Isn't that so true? But, then again, I would say that Severus deserved so much better from his own mother, too.

    Wow! And then, Remus' line of "And you do not go far enough." That was awesome. That man sure does have a way with words.

    I just got home from work (I work night shift/12 hour shifts so I'm a bit tired), so I'm going to post this review right now, even though I've only read about half of this chapter. I'll read the rest later and post another review for the rest of the chapter. I'm loving it so far. Thanks...

    Author's Response:

    I loved writing that little ditty with Sev and Harry.  I love little Harry!

    Remus is one of my favs too.

    I'm glad you liked Remus' lines.  Those were fun.  I love a direct and brutally honest Remus.

    Get some rest and hope you enjoy the rest of the story!  Thanks for being a regular reviewer too!  :) 

Title: Chapter 14: Nudges from Remus 14 Dec 2007 12:09 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, I wholeheartedly agree with your Author's Note, it made me smile.

    I really enjoyed this chapter, particularly assertive Remus. He's usually the gentle mediator but I love how he just gave it to Severus straight in this chapter. I wanted to clap for him. And the last scene was nice.

    Looking forward to the next one! Hope the inspiration keeps flowing.

    Author's Response:

    Severus and Harry are the best!

    Remus was really fun to write this chapter.  I love him direct and brutally honest...somehow it suits him.  :)

    Next one should be coming in a few day, I hope.  It will be full of lots of stuff and a new character too (well, not really new, but new to the story....)  LOL 


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