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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Good chapter. I especially liked the section near the end. Well done!
Author's Response: ROFL I love those two! :o)
Scorpia Author's Response: LOL Glad you liked it! I do have to agree that's it's just the best chapter ever choice. Hee hee. LOL I love that you're laughing at Harry. That's funny!
I loved the fact that Snape was so obviously upset/concerned about the whole bllod quill thing. I think that he would be upset if that had happened to any student, but the fact that it was Harry just made him even angrier. Imagine how he will be when and if he finds out the true extent of the Dursley's treatment of Harry. Anyway, great chapter. It was kind of nice to read it in two parts. That way I could savor it a bit more. But, now I'm on to read the next chapter. It must be my lucky day. Thanks for the update... Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the chapter. The whole blood quill scene was totally inspired by my watching OOTP. I actually had to stop the movie to get it out really quick. Hee hee. Remus is one of my favs as well. He's gonna be in the next chapter quite prominently as well so hope you'll enjoy that. Thanks for reviewing again!
It's funny to think that even back then that Severus wasa little jealous of Remus. But I love the fact that Harry loves his Remus so. Don't we all? In fact, I think in canon he is my second favorite character, after Harry, of course. I love Remus' line "He deserves better from you." Isn't that so true? But, then again, I would say that Severus deserved so much better from his own mother, too. Wow! And then, Remus' line of "And you do not go far enough." That was awesome. That man sure does have a way with words. I just got home from work (I work night shift/12 hour shifts so I'm a bit tired), so I'm going to post this review right now, even though I've only read about half of this chapter. I'll read the rest later and post another review for the rest of the chapter. I'm loving it so far. Thanks...
It's funny to think that even back then that Severus wasa little jealous of Remus. But I love the fact that Harry loves his Remus so. Don't we all? In fact, I think in canon he is my second favorite character, after Harry, of course. I love Remus' line "He deserves better from you." Isn't that so true? But, then again, I would say that Severus deserved so much better from his own mother, too. Wow! And then, Remus' line of "And you do not go far enough." That was awesome. That man sure does have a way with words. I just got home from work (I work night shift/12 hour shifts so I'm a bit tired), so I'm going to post this review right now, even though I've only read about half of this chapter. I'll read the rest later and post another review for the rest of the chapter. I'm loving it so far. Thanks... Author's Response: I loved writing that little ditty with Sev and Harry. I love little Harry! Remus is one of my favs too. I'm glad you liked Remus' lines. Those were fun. I love a direct and brutally honest Remus. Get some rest and hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Thanks for being a regular reviewer too! :)
I really enjoyed this chapter, particularly assertive Remus. He's usually the gentle mediator but I love how he just gave it to Severus straight in this chapter. I wanted to clap for him. And the last scene was nice. Looking forward to the next one! Hope the inspiration keeps flowing. Author's Response: Severus and Harry are the best! Remus was really fun to write this chapter. I love him direct and brutally honest...somehow it suits him. :) Next one should be coming in a few day, I hope. It will be full of lots of stuff and a new character too (well, not really new, but new to the story....) LOL |
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