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Reviews For Lily's Charm
Great chap.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :o)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Remus seemed antsy when he was taking Harry to his rooms for the lesson. Was this just because he knew that Severus was going to tell him about not being allowed to go to Hogsmeade or something else? I'm looking very much forward to those two spending some time together instead of the Hogsmeade thing, and especially with no other task hanging over them like Occlumency. It was so nice of Severus to ask! Nice way to divert an argument too, otherwise Harry could have gone on for awhile, I'm sure. I saw that you have a new chapter for "What If..." also so I'm off to read that! Cheers! Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Slow progress for sure, but progress nonetheless. Yeah, Harry's friends are coming in really handy here, aren't they? Remus is up again in the next chapter so you'll have to wait to see what his problem is. Don't worry though...his angst will be sorted out (kind of at least) and we'll be back to a more happy Remus. Ginny is up as well and Harry and Severus spending a carefree day together. Well, all right...it won't be completely carefree because what fun would that be? LOL I really like that you saw that Sev was using the invitation partially as a way to distract Harry. He does tend to go on and on about things, doesn't he. :o) Thanks for reviewing. Glad you're enjoying still!
Lio
Lio Author's Response: I'm glad you like my Snape characterization. He's just really fun to write. And, I love him as a snarky arse too. Even his concern is prickly. LOL. Thanks for reviewing. Hope you keep enjoying! :o)
They really have made a lot of progress, which is evident at how well Harry accepts the idea of spending the day with Severus (which at one time would have seemed like the worst possible punishment) instead of going to Hogsmeade. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: I can't resist Protective Sev. I just see him that way with anyone he is close to in his life. Harry is just following along where Sev leads and now that he has a pretty big inkling that Severus wants to give this father/son thing a try, he is more than willing! Thanks for reviewing again! :o)
LOVED IT!! Ahh, poor Harry, being so overworked. But, what can you expect as he is the bloody boy-who-lived. *sigh* At least he's getting along better with Snape and they've come to somekind of understanding in relation to their relationship. I was excited to see Ol' Sev at Quidditch tryouts and loved Harry's reaction to knowing he was there too. Severus is right, he needs to work on hiding his emotions a little. But, the Occlumency lessons do seem to be going well. I'm glad that I gave you "dementor storm" as inspiration, it makes me think that maybe, just maybe if I actually do put some time into it, that I can write my own fics...hmmm. (Although, all the credit goes to you, I merely was lazy and didn't feel like writing out how you described it as and merely cut and pasted those two words together. But, thanks anyway! And of course, I don't mind at all! Harry can have anything he wants, except maybe my laptop!) Back to your story, which was great by the way, I don't know if I mentioned that! I wonder why Remus was so, umm, I don't know, irratable? If that's the word. Was he just angry at Snape for not letting Harry go to Hogsmead? I for one belive you to be scheming below the surface...so what is it?! I was a tad sad that all we saw was a moody-depressed Lupin, too. More Lupin (if it works in the next chapter, that is!)!! And that Draco...so he has a mission to do for the Dark Lord concerning Dumbledore? Hmmm...I wonder if you're going Cannon on us? Hopefully not, because I think you've got some better ideas! I really enjoyed the dynamic between Draco and Harry in potions too, it was so in character. That moody Draco! And that last Occlumency scene. I'm glad that Harry and Severus are getting along together and are somewhat comfortable with the parent/son status that they've aquired. It was great to see Severus look "distictly uncomfortable." But, at least he presented Harry with an alternative solution (that I look forward to seeing) that will hopefully bring them even closer together. Once again, great fic and now I'm off to Chapter 17!! Have a great weekend! Until next chapter! Author's Response: Yeah, it was a bummer that the sight was down and YAY that it's back up again! Harry is pretty overworked, isn't he? Sigh but at least he's got lots of people surrounding him for support this year. :O) It was really fun to write Snape at Quidditch, watching Harry and Harry being so "dazed" about it. LOL I just love dazed/dumbfounded Harry. And, thanks again for the dementor storm. I loved it so much. It was perfect. And, yes, you should write a fanfic. That would be awesome! Oh, Remus.... Poor Remus is having a rough time right now but don't worry, he's back in the next chapter with Harry. Nope, he's not angry at Sev, per se, but it does have to do with Severus. ;o) Glad you liked the dynamic in Potions. I really love mean Draco; he's such a nice contrast to Harry. That was a good scene to write at the end. It was the first time Severus is really parental with Harry and it was a beautiful moment for both of them. Sev's reaction to the whole thing is up next...and more Lupin and Ginny as well! Hop you enjoy! |
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