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Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 19 Jul 2023 2:45 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Heartbreaking chapter end. I wonder who ratted them out.
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 17 Aug 2010 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    No... Poor guy. But, he can't be dead! I refuse to believe it! He CAN'T! *stamps foot for emphasis*
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 12 Mar 2008 7:10 pm
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    My only sense of relief from this chapter is that Remus and Dumbledore weren't Death Eaters in disguise. I SO certain that they were, when Remus gave Harry the sleeping draught, but I'm happy they weren't, lol. Now I'm scared to read the next chapter :( I know he can't be dead, but... yikes.

    Author's Response:

    Some others thought that as well.  LOL  Glad I could fool you.  It's fun.  :o)

    Yikes is right.   

Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 03 Mar 2008 5:18 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    (sob) I (hicup) loved this chapter, Severus better find a way to rise from the dead! :(

    Author's Response: Hmmm...you'll just have to wait and see.  Poor Sev and Harry.  :o(
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    Waaah!!! I need more!
    I simply loved it! I wish I could write like that ;_;
    I'm waiting for the next chapter, but please... I love happy endings!!

    Author's Response:

    YAY that you loved it.  I'm so glad.  More is coming....up soon. 

    Can't give away any details though!  LOL

Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 6:47 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    OK...I had to be up at 4 a.m. with a kid having nightmares and when I had trouble going back to sleep I had one thought in my head...

    WHERE IS THAT DAMN FAWKES WHEN YOU NEED HIM!

    Going back to drinking coffee now.

    Author's Response: Oh, you are too funny.  I told PK I wouldn't respond to the two of you and your funnyness because I'm supposed to be writing but I can't help myself.  Okay...back to my chapter.  LOL
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 4:17 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    "Hmmm...nope Sev's not going to be giving out any details of the night's activities. Sorry."
    WHAT DOES THAT MEAN?!!! NOOO!! I want to speculate and talk, not go to class...but I just had to ask!!

    Author's Response: LOL  *evil cackle*
Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 3:49 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Nooooo. Sobbing. update (he can't be dead - JKR did that to us - sob).

    He promised.

    (How did Voldie know?)

    Author's Response:

    :o(  Sorry you're sad (but not really as I love a crying reader...LOL) 

    Nope, can't give anything away.  What fun would that be?  :oP 

Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 1:16 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    No! What a cliffhanger. We got two chapters though so I can't complain. We did get two chapters didn't we? Otherwise I just missed one previously.

    I liked that Harry told Severus he loved him but it did make everything final. Though Severus does have to wake up so he can tell Harry aloud. Doesn't he? How did Harry wake up after the Dreamless Sleep potion too? I was expecting him to be kind of stuck.

    And how did Severus survive? I'm guessing it has something to do with Lucius being given the opportunity to kill him? I kind of hope he's okay too, which is strange because I really hate the guy in everything else.

    Well I think you already know how frustrated you're making the readers with this ending so I won't nag. Best of luck with the next one though, can't wait!

    Author's Response:

    LOL  Thanks for not nagging...though really I don't mind.  Let's me know you're all still with me! 

    Sort two chapter...yeah.  Two in one day at least!  YAY!  

    It wasn't Dreamless Sleep...just a regular old Sleeping Draught like he had at the Weasley's way back in chapter two and only a mild one because he was just going a big hysterical there at the end.  LOL

    No secret telling now.  :o)  You'll just have to wait.  I'm glad you're rooting for Lucius a bit.  He needs it, that one.  Thanks for the review!  :o) 

Title: Chapter 30: Dance of the Death Eater 28 Jan 2008 9:41 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no! What a cliffie! What a fantastic story.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Sorry about the cliffie!  :oP  Thanks for reviewing. 

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