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Reviews For Lily's Charm
I'm so glad that Harry and Ginny finally got together. I really like your Ginny. She seems so self-assured and confident. I've always imagined she would be after growing up with six older brothers. Harry can be so oblivious sometimes, so he needs someone who will help him see what's right in front of him. Snape's plan to make Malfoy and Harry work together is making much more sense now. I'm not sure it will work, but at least I can see where he's going with it. It should be interesting to see how that all plays out. Thanks for the update. Take care... Author's Response: LOL, I do eat and sleep...just don't have any other hobbies at the moment as I am obsessed. My husband is in med school so I spend most nights, holed up with my computer just typing away while he is at the hospital until midnight. :) YAY for Harry and Ginny. I love the two of them together so much. That was definitely fun to write. And Harry definitely needs her. Yep, Draco and his family are destined to play a very important role in Harry's sixth year. I'm not so sure it will work either, but as Severus said, he's got no choice but to try. :) Thanks for reviewing again.
from Snape and Harry's relationship. For another, Harry should NOT have to share Snape's (in this case, his father's) affections with another boy. (Especially, not a mean, arrogant, spineless git - who gets more than enough money, love and attention from his own family.) Lastly, because people tend to write Draco completely AU and heroic until I wonder why Harry's even in the story. I don't have a clue what you have planned for your characters and I truly doubt that is where you are headed. This is just a real pet peeve of mine. As you can see I don't particularly care for the Malfoys. In the novels, I gave Draco a couple of points for not being completely evil and because I felt slightly sorry for him because he was stupid and got in way over his head – But nothing in Book 7 changed my opinion of him as a mean, pampered, spoiled, spineless git. The Malfoy's in general were extremely self-serving, self-centered, and as could be predicted - did little more than try to save their own skins. I still rather strongly resent that Snape could be fond of Draco-sodding-Malfoy but could never acknowledge anything of value in Harry (except maybe his eyes.) I agree with your author's comments that Harry is very forgiving and would do anything for a chance at a family. The Mirror of Erised showed it as his greatest desire after all. I am glad you are showing his forgiving nature and ability to love in this story. (I see a lot of authors who over emphasize Harry's temper to the point for me, he is no longer likable.) I hope, hope, hope Snape will come to appreciate some of Harry's positive characteristics. This chapter, showed him viewing him very critically - seeing mostly faults or irritations, i.e. Harry shrugs too much, has a temper, is too sensitive, is disrespectful, etc. It is logical this will be a gradual shift but I hope he comes to see that Harry is also: extremely loyal, “remarkably selfless”, “brave”, has “good instincts”, “possess a great capacity for love”, has a great dry sense of humor, and if nothing else he is superb at Quidditch/flying. (The sorting hat had a whole laundry list of some of his finer qualities.) Dumbledore said “maybe a man in a million could unite the Hallows” so I hope some of the unique character traits that made Harry the worthy possessors of the Hallows will become evident to Snape. Well this is kind of a rant more than a review so I apologize for that. Your story is very good! Author's Response: "The Malfoy's in general were extremely self-serving, self-centered, and as could be predicted - did little more than try to save their own skins."--And, that's exactly who these Malfoys are as well....I just have no immediate plans to reveal exactly what they're doing here yet! LOL But don't worry, Draco is still the same Draco. :) I think you're right...Severus really spent a lot of time noticing things about Harry, but it was not meant as a negative thing, more that Snape is paying more attention to Harry and has annoyances like wishing Harry would not shrug or be disrespectful that seem a tad parental....before why would Snape have cared if Harry was shrugged? And, he's frustrated that Harry is too sensitive because Severus just wants Harry to accept him and not have to worry about Harry's feelings as Snape doesn't do so very well with feelings. Don't worry...Severus and Harry's relationship has a lot of evolving to do and they have a lot to go through in this story so they'll get there eventually. I'm glad you like the story, even with Draco. But, Draco has a very important purpose here and nope, it's not to share Severus with Harry. Harry is Snape's son, Draco is Snape's student and Lucius Malfoy is manipulative. Nuff said. :) Thanks for reviewing.
I loved the fact that Snape was so obviously upset/concerned about the whole bllod quill thing. I think that he would be upset if that had happened to any student, but the fact that it was Harry just made him even angrier. Imagine how he will be when and if he finds out the true extent of the Dursley's treatment of Harry. Anyway, great chapter. It was kind of nice to read it in two parts. That way I could savor it a bit more. But, now I'm on to read the next chapter. It must be my lucky day. Thanks for the update... Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the chapter. The whole blood quill scene was totally inspired by my watching OOTP. I actually had to stop the movie to get it out really quick. Hee hee. Remus is one of my favs as well. He's gonna be in the next chapter quite prominently as well so hope you'll enjoy that. Thanks for reviewing again!
It was great fun, as usual, to "watch" Severus and Harry in the same room. That Severus actually let him use some of his personal inventory truly says something, even if verbally he is just as caustic. But I loved Harry telling him to "be careful" because that is just SO Harry. And Severus telling him to stay in his rooms? Well, that is terribly parental isn't it? I'm glad Ginny's got some sense in the emotions department and can keep Harry on track with his conflicting emotions towards Severus. The whole relationship with the Malfoys is interesting (in a fun, disturbing kind of way). Lots of questions in my mind here that just won't get answered until they get answered by our beloved writer's muse. As usual - when's the next chapter? ;-) Author's Response: Hi! I know what you mean...I shopped forever this weekend and it's been a nightmare but my nights are still free after the kids go to bed so no worries in the writing department, at least. Yeah, the two of them really are a pair. Harry can't help himself from spilling impulsively over with whatever emotions he happens to be feeling and Severus can't bear to show one iota of emotion. It's fun though to have him show how he feels in differnt ways, without words. And, even more fun to watch him care about Harry when he doesn't even realize his is! I do love Ginny. She's awesome. I'm glad you liked the Malfoys this time around. They have a nice juicy role to play in this little fic and yes, they are fun in a disturbing kind of way--LOL. My muse already has the answers about the Malfoys, though it has been known to change its mind as has been the case with the chapter I am working on write now. I did not expect what is happening...that is for sure! :oP Next chapter should be up in a day or two and then hopefully one more before I head out for the holidays. Thanks for the review and hope you keep enjoying.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the great compliments. Don't worry...this fic has a long way to go still. :)
The opening scene with Harry and Severus in the potions classroom was great! I'm glad that their relationship is moving at a reasonable pace. It's perfectly believable, wonderful job! I'm also glad to note that maybe Harry's not as easy to read as Severus once thought. That certainly makes things interesting. And Severus' desire to break Harry of his shrugging was extremely funny. I think I'd do the same thing. It seems that every other answer Harry gives is a shrug. *shrugs* Oh, Harry. He's got a bit of Slytherin in him! Eventhough his lie to Seamus was pitiful...hopefully we get to see some more of that! And more of Ginny too!! I love how close they've gotten, it was beautiful! It's great that Harry goes to her for help too, they're just so adorable!! I was a H/G, R/H shipper from the start!! YAY! Interesting background on the Malfoys. I'm glad to see Severus being able to confide in someone, even if they really can't be considered 'friends.' Is Draco's 'task' just like it is in cannon? I can't wait to see what it is...ooh!! Could it be to befriend Harry Potter?! After all, Narcissa does say, "But, he hates my Draco!” Hmmm... Well, I think that's all, good luck writing and have a good week!! Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. The first bit was really hard to write...trying so painstakingly to get Snape and Harry just right. It was much easier when they so openly hated each other! LOL Harry does shrug a lot and it is extremely annoying. :) Even funnier though that Snape has these random inklings of perhaps...parentalness? :) Yeah, I guess Severus was right...Harry does need some help with his lying abilities. Yay that you liked the Ginny scene. I am a huge H/G and R/Hr shipper too. Both couples are just perfect together. The kiss was really fun to write. Hmmmm.....is Sev confiding in the Malfoys? Mwuhahahahahaha Thanks for another great review and you have a great week too, though hopefully another chapter will be up before week's end!
It's funny to think that even back then that Severus wasa little jealous of Remus. But I love the fact that Harry loves his Remus so. Don't we all? In fact, I think in canon he is my second favorite character, after Harry, of course. I love Remus' line "He deserves better from you." Isn't that so true? But, then again, I would say that Severus deserved so much better from his own mother, too. Wow! And then, Remus' line of "And you do not go far enough." That was awesome. That man sure does have a way with words. I just got home from work (I work night shift/12 hour shifts so I'm a bit tired), so I'm going to post this review right now, even though I've only read about half of this chapter. I'll read the rest later and post another review for the rest of the chapter. I'm loving it so far. Thanks...
It's funny to think that even back then that Severus wasa little jealous of Remus. But I love the fact that Harry loves his Remus so. Don't we all? In fact, I think in canon he is my second favorite character, after Harry, of course. I love Remus' line "He deserves better from you." Isn't that so true? But, then again, I would say that Severus deserved so much better from his own mother, too. Wow! And then, Remus' line of "And you do not go far enough." That was awesome. That man sure does have a way with words. I just got home from work (I work night shift/12 hour shifts so I'm a bit tired), so I'm going to post this review right now, even though I've only read about half of this chapter. I'll read the rest later and post another review for the rest of the chapter. I'm loving it so far. Thanks... Author's Response: I loved writing that little ditty with Sev and Harry. I love little Harry! Remus is one of my favs too. I'm glad you liked Remus' lines. Those were fun. I love a direct and brutally honest Remus. Get some rest and hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Thanks for being a regular reviewer too! :)
I really enjoyed this chapter, particularly assertive Remus. He's usually the gentle mediator but I love how he just gave it to Severus straight in this chapter. I wanted to clap for him. And the last scene was nice. Looking forward to the next one! Hope the inspiration keeps flowing. Author's Response: Severus and Harry are the best! Remus was really fun to write this chapter. I love him direct and brutally honest...somehow it suits him. :) Next one should be coming in a few day, I hope. It will be full of lots of stuff and a new character too (well, not really new, but new to the story....) LOL
Ok, I loved the 1981 scene. I just love the exchange that went on there! Poor Severus...who was perfectly in character here! I especially loved his reaction to how he reacted in the Hospital Wing. I love seeing his logic and how he assesed the situation, it was brilliant. His reaction to Harry's scar from Umbridge was also spot-on. And I love how Harry reacted...is he making a joke?! Remus was also awesome here, I just love him! He's the perfect influence for both Severus and Harry and I hope that he gets to stay in the picture once the two of them become closer. His light hearted tone after DADA when talking to Harry was excellent, I've always imagined him as more level headed than Harry and Severus put togeter. Keep him awesome!! Harry, Harry, Harry. That poor kid, but at least he understands a little bit more about Severus now, and can react accordingly. I do agree with you, though. I think he would try everything he's able to in order to have a family...even if said family is the Greasy Git of the Dungeons. I was also excited to see a bit of the trio in this chapter too...with Ginny!! Ahh, Ginny! So, IS it a date?, huh, huh? Don't know if you'll address it, either, but does Malfoy recieve a zero on his potion? Do we get to find out more about him in later chapters?! I'm just so excited for the next chapter!! YAY!! I really want to see what Severus is thinking about all this. You really do a good job at characterization and the positioning of details within the story, it is truly a pleasure to read! Until next chapter!! (Who needs to study for finals, anyway?) Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you got a bit of a break with the chapter. Finals are no fun. I love the 1981 scenes too. I just can't resist Sev, Lily and James and then throw little Harry into the mix and wow, how fun! I'm glad too that you like Severus' ponderings in the dungeon after his tantrum in the Infirmary. It was fun to write, because he's moody, but logical at the same time and pretty dense too. Severus is very complicated! :) The scene at the end was really fun too. Snape cracking a joke, totally deadpan was awesome. I love Harry and him interacting more now, though of course it's not going to be smooth sailing at all. Yay! Remus is great, isn't he? I really think you're right. He's the perfect balance for those two quick-tempered guys. Don't worry, there will be lots more Remus, and angst to go with it as Harry and Severus grow slowly closer. Harry has got to be totally confused but he can think logically a bit too, just like dad! :) I just really got the feeling after OOTP that Harry would accept Severus if only give half a chance. It doesn't take much for Harry to let you in his heart. I love that about him, especially that it makes him so heart breakingly vulnerable. Ginny is the best. I guess you'll have to see if it's a date, won't you? LOL Dont worry, don't worry, Malfoy has a big role to play in this fic still. I love Malfoy and he'll be around a ton. This story is nowhere near even a midway point, so we've got lots to do still. Malfoy doesn't receive a zero, even though Severus was rather annoyed at him for insinuating that Harry was stupid during Potions class. :) He's got to keep ihis mask on, so to speak, you know and of course, he is fond of the mean little blond Slytherin, but more about that later. :) I love that you are so excited about the story. It really boosts me to get my butt writing! Next chapter should be up in a few days, as usual. (and yep, HP fanfics are way more important than finals).
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