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Reviews For Boy's Adventure
Title: Aunt Marge 09 Sep 2009 2:05 am
Reviewer: hacklebolt (Signed) [Report This]
    rainbow Dudley has a nice ring to it. lol nice chap.
Title: Aunt Marge 26 Nov 2007 7:36 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so terribly sweet. And I can just SEE lovely Jo enjoying every minute of Harry's conversation. She will probably be repeating the conversation to everyone for weeks and will tell all the men she knows that they can only be "fit" or "handsome" and to be "handsome" you had to be fat and stupid. Snicker.
Title: Aunt Marge 21 Nov 2007 4:49 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That's a very realistic flow of thought going through Harry's head you've got going on. Why hasn't anyone pegged Harry as responsible for Dudley? Or is that why Petunia is taking him home?
Title: Aunt Marge 21 Nov 2007 4:07 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good story. Can't wait to read more. Harry's suddenly fairly cheeky and a bit forward. The cheeky part I can see...the forwardness...is that how he manifests his desire for attention? Perhaps he's just so naive that it wouldn't occur to him not to speak. He certainly seems like a cute little Slytherin Harry.
Title: Aunt Marge 21 Nov 2007 2:47 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute chapter. Harry is so unknowingly adorable and sweet in this chapter with all his big ideas about being a film star and being "well fit". Very cute.

    Will we be seeing more of Jo, or was she just a passing character? And exactly what happened to Dudley? Just a bit curious about all of this. Anyway, thanks for the update.

    Author's Response: Harry's accidental magic happened to Dudley. And thanks very much.
Title: Aunt Marge 20 Nov 2007 11:46 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Did you post this on fanfiction.net? Jo is sounding really familiar. I think I read it there. I think you've gotten Harry's characterization down fairly well. He probably wouldn't be meek like so many authors make him out to be.

    Author's Response: Yeah, it's on ff.net.
Title: Aunt Marge 20 Nov 2007 8:33 pm
Reviewer: Jade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Doesn't peche mean sin? The french word for pear is poire....or did you mean for Harry to say it wrong?

    Author's Response: Yeah, he's supposed to have got it wrong. A little girl (the real-life daughter of Jo) told me that, and it seemed to fit. ;)

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