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Reviews For Boy's Adventure
I'm really loving how you have Harry talk about the everyday things, but you make them so real that they seem extraordinary!! Poor Harry is breaking my heart, how he takes being hit or ignored or starved in his stride like it's nothing, because to him it is nothing out of the ordinary!! I have to wonder what Petunia is setting Harry up for, with the new clothes and the food and the attention - I just hope it doesn't make things worse for Harry in the end!! Definitely looking forward to more - I do hope that when Severus shows up he won't be a complete arse to poor Harry!! Scarlett
Author's Response: It's so cool when authors you really like review your stuff, you've no idea! Thanks loads!
i mean it's a good story so far Author's Response: Chapter six Severus makes his entrance.
Author's Response: Ah, thanks. He's just turned nine. |
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