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Reviews For Boy's Adventure
You've brilliantly written this story in first-person perspective, and I'm in awe of how well you pay attention to details. You've also added humor to this story, such as Harry talking about "fat ladies that have to be somewhere by three o'clock"... That really made me laugh. I'm anxiously awaiting Severus's arrival in the next chapter. I'm also curious as to whether or not he'll be civil to Harry. I'm guessing not. But regardless, I can't wait! Excellent job!
Having to eat out of bins and try to sleep in a washroom at Tescos!! I'm glad he got a bit of peace and quiet in that garden for the afternoon, as he's surely going to need it!! London can be a dangerous place, and I'm extremely worried for him!! It's amazing how he can make the abuse he's suffered at the Dursleys into a good thing by rationalizing it as him being a Superhero - and to the Wizarding world he is a hero!! Did none of the stupid wizard folk who saw him wandering about London by himself not stop to wonder why he was by himself?! Honestly!! Looking forward to seeing Severus - I'm still hoping that he'll sweep in to rescue Wee!Harry and not be an @ss to him!! (fingers crossed!!) Scarlett
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