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Reviews For Boy's Adventure
Title: Snakes in London 02 Dec 2007 4:37 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter. And I'm sorry it took me a few days to reveiw. Curse the busy life...

    You've brilliantly written this story in first-person perspective, and I'm in awe of how well you pay attention to details. You've also added humor to this story, such as Harry talking about "fat ladies that have to be somewhere by three o'clock"... That really made me laugh.

    I'm anxiously awaiting Severus's arrival in the next chapter. I'm also curious as to whether or not he'll be civil to Harry. I'm guessing not. But regardless, I can't wait!

    Excellent job!
Title: Snakes in London 01 Dec 2007 10:17 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Another interesting chapter! But, you know, you've got some nerve promising us Snape in the next chapter and then having us have to wait! Humph, the nerve of some peopele ;D Please post the next chapter soon! This story is really entertaining and differn't from most stories I've read. Little Harry cracks me up ^_^
Title: Snakes in London 01 Dec 2007 7:35 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Little Superhero Harry!!

    Having to eat out of bins and try to sleep in a washroom at Tescos!! I'm glad he got a bit of peace and quiet in that garden for the afternoon, as he's surely going to need it!! London can be a dangerous place, and I'm extremely worried for him!!

    It's amazing how he can make the abuse he's suffered at the Dursleys into a good thing by rationalizing it as him being a Superhero - and to the Wizarding world he is a hero!!

    Did none of the stupid wizard folk who saw him wandering about London by himself not stop to wonder why he was by himself?! Honestly!!

    Looking forward to seeing Severus - I'm still hoping that he'll sweep in to rescue Wee!Harry and not be an @ss to him!! (fingers crossed!!)
    Scarlett
Title: Snakes in London 30 Nov 2007 10:08 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's voice continues to charm. What a reasonable conclusion for him to draw--he's a superhero, not a freak. And I'm intrigued by the wizards spotting him and greeting him. I've never really thought before about how they manage to recognize him in canon. Do they just notice the scar, or is there some other way that wizards recognize another wizard among muggles? Now you've got me thinking.
Title: Snakes in London 30 Nov 2007 3:55 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, Harry's resourceful and naive...I can't wait to see what he makes out of Snape.

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