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Reviews For Boy's Adventure
Title: Snape 14 Aug 2009 4:28 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are doing such a great job writing from the perspective of a nine-year-old! You really have an awful lot of talent!!! I just hope that your muse is going to stay with you for a while, because I love this story! I read it before, but had to repeat it bcause of the long break since the last update, and I loved it again!!! I love your Harry and his view of the world and how he's such a surviver using his fantasy and creativity to deal with the terrible circumstances of growing up without love and care! I just hope he'll find that with Severus somehow...
    Great, great, great, please go on writing - it's fantastic!
Title: Snape 14 Aug 2009 3:57 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Way, way, way cute! Fantastic chapter! I loved it. I loved all the descriptions of Snape. Very good childish imagination for those! Bushy caterpillar eyebrows, ect. Great job! I'm so glad that Harry got his snake back!

    Just so you know, i fixed the formatting of your story a little bit. You had a _______ that was too long to the point where it created a horizontal scroll bar, which could make it difficult for many readers to read your chapter because they would have to scroll from side to side to read all the text. I changed it to a horizontal rule. In the future, you should either make the ____ part short, or add a horizontal rule (which has a button on the TinyMCE editor you use when you add your chapter).

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!

    I hadn't noticed that with the underscore. I'll have to be more careful about it next time.

    Glad you enjoyed!

Title: Snape 14 Aug 2009 12:14 am
Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story and I'm so happy that you've had the chance to update! I'm so amused by the superhero dialogue. Harry's tone of voice in the story is infectious. You can't help but fall into his thought patterns. Thank you for updating!!
Title: Snape 13 Aug 2009 4:48 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating!!!!!! I LOVE this story and am so glad you have decided to continue with it!! This is the best first-person, young Harry story I've ever read, and your writing is superb. Please keep it up :-) Good luck with your next chapter. I'll wait patiently. Oh my gosh, I'm stoked about his update...LOL. It was brilliant--your best chapter yet.
Title: Snape 13 Aug 2009 7:45 am
Reviewer: bugeyedmonster2 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! You've updated! *does Snoopy dance* I'm so looking forward to the rest of Boy's Adventure.
Title: A Ferry to France 11 Mar 2009 6:41 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful!! Please keep this up!!
Title: A Ferry to France 08 Sep 2008 12:57 am
Reviewer: Jenny (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a good story. I wonder if there will be more soon. What's Snape doing while Harry's on his way to France?
Title: A Ferry to France 27 May 2008 5:22 pm
Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed) [Report This]
    What a cool story! It sounds EXACTLY like a nine year old speaking, which is great because I've read other stories where people make Harry sound like he's thirty and he's only ten.

    Great job, keep up the good work, and update soon!
Title: A Ferry to France 02 Mar 2008 10:50 am
Reviewer: Mango (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWW. Just- AWWWW!
Title: A Ferry to France 18 Feb 2008 1:43 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is marvelous. I love it. I love it, I love it, I love it.

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