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Reviews For Boy's Adventure
Hi Siriusly! There is this new Harry Potter RPG site that my sister shared with me recently and we would be thrilled to have some more members. We have many, many characters available, both teachers and students. There is also a section on the Order of the Phoenix headquarters and Voldemort’s lair. I don’t know if Sirius or Dumbledore are available, you’ll have to ask Sara, the Admin, a.k.a. Cutewolfie, if you want them. I am playing as Neville Longbottom as my student (that guy is a doof, he cracks me up) and am in seventh year if you want to be the same. I’m also going to do Professor Snape as my teacher because Sara mentioned that she doesn’t have any Professors yet. You could ask my sister, whom is playing Hermione, to reserve a professor for you like she is doing for me. If you do a student, either cannon or your own, you can go sign up as them right now. You could probably do both, just have to ask the Admin. We are still working on the site, it will be officially opened in January or February since we are still working on how classes will work and if anything needs to be added. We plan on adding things like Hagrid’s hut and Professor’s offices once that particular member joins. Here is the link: http://z15.invisionfree.com/Krysthaven_Hogwarts/index.php?act=idx I hope you join soon, I’ll be waiting in the c-box as Neville, Ttyl, Beth P.S. If you want to join, I’d advise it soon because we are only accepting a number of people from this site so others have a chance too. And I LOVE this story! Please post again soon. *puppy-dog eyes*
I'm really anxious to see some more Snape in this story. I can only imagine how well he and Harry will get along...*rolls eyes*... I can't wait for the next chapter. This whole story is just perfect!
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I suggest you get a beta reader to help you with your spelling, grammar and punctuation. Your story would be a lot better if you took the time to fix the typos. Not to be mean, but your story sloppily written. I like your banner though. Author's Response: I appreciate your opinion, but would like to point out that if you had read past the first chapter the typos dwindle to one or two at most. I am sure you understand that writing the next chapter is more important at the moment than the purposeful mispelling of "citizen". I do plan on going over the typos as soon as I finish the next chapter. rnrnAs for the grammar, I tend not to worry (considering this is written from the viewpoint of a nine year old), but, again, thank you for your concern. Perhaps you would like to beta for me?
Author's Response: We'll see about dear Sev. He just may take a bit of time to come round to the fact that Harry is not a vicious, (Snape) flesh-eating James Potter clone.
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