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Reviews For Boy's Adventure
Title: A Ferry to France 15 Jan 2008 3:55 am
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLease, please update soon! You write this child's perspective very, very convincing and humorous! And I like your take on Harry's thinking and acting!!! Nice first encounter with Snape - I'm sure he'll just love bloody Potter even mor for that stunt ;-)
Title: A Ferry to France 04 Jan 2008 9:37 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Here is the message I've been trying to send:

    Hi Siriusly!

    There is this new Harry Potter RPG site that my sister shared with me recently and we would be thrilled to have some more members.

    We have many, many characters available, both teachers and students. There is also a section on the Order of the Phoenix headquarters and Voldemort’s lair. I don’t know if Sirius or Dumbledore are available, you’ll have to ask Sara, the Admin, a.k.a. Cutewolfie, if you want them.

    I am playing as Neville Longbottom as my student (that guy is a doof, he cracks me up) and am in seventh year if you want to be the same. I’m also going to do Professor Snape as my teacher because Sara mentioned that she doesn’t have any Professors yet.

    You could ask my sister, whom is playing Hermione, to reserve a professor for you like she is doing for me. If you do a student, either cannon or your own, you can go sign up as them right now. You could probably do both, just have to ask the Admin.

    We are still working on the site, it will be officially opened in January or February since we are still working on how classes will work and if anything needs to be added. We plan on adding things like Hagrid’s hut and Professor’s offices once that particular member joins.

    Here is the link: http://z15.invisionfree.com/Krysthaven_Hogwarts/index.php?act=idx

    I hope you join soon, I’ll be waiting in the c-box as Neville,

    Ttyl,
    Beth

    P.S. If you want to join, I’d advise it soon because we are only accepting a number of people from this site so others have a chance too.

    And I LOVE this story! Please post again soon. *puppy-dog eyes*
Title: A Ferry to France 02 Jan 2008 12:41 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellant! Harry is as funny as ever, silly little kid, and I really enjoyd the chapter. I hope more Snape action happens soon! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Title: A Ferry to France 28 Dec 2007 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great chapter! You have such an imagination! I think I've said it before, but this is definitely the best story I've read in Harry's perspective, using first person. It's brilliant. You've made him into such a believable little boy. He's hilarious. I also like how you've written the Dursleys. It reminds me very much of how J.K. wrote them in the original version--Uncle Vernon making odd noises when he's trying to stall...Dudley making himself cry just so Harry will get in trouble... Totally spot-on.

    I'm really anxious to see some more Snape in this story. I can only imagine how well he and Harry will get along...*rolls eyes*... I can't wait for the next chapter. This whole story is just perfect!
Title: A Ferry to France 28 Dec 2007 4:31 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just can't get over how well you write Harry and Hermione. It's amazing. How do you do it? I'm sure I couldn't get into a nine-year-old's head like that. Great chapter. I love how Harry never says sorry and his delight in saying bad words. That was amusing. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to read more!
Title: The Suitcase and Hermione 13 Dec 2007 10:34 pm
Reviewer: xoxamandaxox (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing story, I love it can't wait for next chapter.
    x
Title: The Dursleys 13 Dec 2007 8:50 am
Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Citisen? What's a 'citisen?' Did you mean 'citizen?' Also, what does 'cal' mean? Did you intend to write 'call?'

    I suggest you get a beta reader to help you with your spelling, grammar and punctuation. Your story would be a lot better if you took the time to fix the typos. Not to be mean, but your story sloppily written. I like your banner though.

    Author's Response: I appreciate your opinion, but would like to point out that if you had read past the first chapter the typos dwindle to one or two at most. I am sure you understand that writing the next chapter is more important at the moment than the purposeful mispelling of "citizen". I do plan on going over the typos as soon as I finish the next chapter. rnrnAs for the grammar, I tend not to worry (considering this is written from the viewpoint of a nine year old), but, again, thank you for your concern. Perhaps you would like to beta for me?
Title: The Suitcase and Hermione 13 Dec 2007 6:03 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is so funny and cute. Yes! Snape has finally arrived, everyone cheer. I really, really hope you update again soon. Please do, it make me very happy!
Title: The Suitcase and Hermione 12 Dec 2007 9:46 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry was so hilarious in this. Of course, Severus is the bad guy to this superhero. And worrying about hiding in a girly suitcase. Snicker.

    Author's Response: We'll see about dear Sev. He just may take a bit of time to come round to the fact that Harry is not a vicious, (Snape) flesh-eating James Potter clone.
Title: The Suitcase and Hermione 12 Dec 2007 2:28 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lol! Hexasperated. And the whole superhero thing. I love it! Please keep writing!

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