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Reviews For Boy's Adventure
Title: The Suitcase and Hermione 12 Dec 2007 4:38 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    The fate of the world could depend on it. Well, that was just cute!
    But, how is Snape going to find him now that he accidently apparated? Whew, Snape's probably not very happy with that.
Title: The Suitcase and Hermione 12 Dec 2007 4:34 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I am in love with this story. Completely. I love how you've characterized Harry. He's hilarious and adorable and his thoughts are so dead-on for a young boy. For some reason this story reminds me a bit of the kids' show Charlie and Lola (a bit). Have you ever seen it?

    Anyway, the dialogue is fabulous, and I absolutely loved how you opened the chapter with the conversation between Severus and Dumbledore.

    I can't wait until Snape appears again. I bet he won't be too happy with Harry.

    This is incredible. I almost leapt off the seat when I saw you'd updated. Keep them coming!

    Author's Response:

    Almost clicked report this when I meant to respond! That wouldn't have been good!

     

    I have seen Charlie and Lola, actually. Lol, I used to put it on in the hopes that my little brother would forget the Tweenies and the Wiggles. No such luck, but it had to have been one of the most enjoyable kid's shows. I think about Charlie sometimes writing Harry haha. Funny you pointed it out.

     

    And thank-you for all of your wonderful reviews! They make me so happy.  

Title: Snakes in London 02 Dec 2007 4:37 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter. And I'm sorry it took me a few days to reveiw. Curse the busy life...

    You've brilliantly written this story in first-person perspective, and I'm in awe of how well you pay attention to details. You've also added humor to this story, such as Harry talking about "fat ladies that have to be somewhere by three o'clock"... That really made me laugh.

    I'm anxiously awaiting Severus's arrival in the next chapter. I'm also curious as to whether or not he'll be civil to Harry. I'm guessing not. But regardless, I can't wait!

    Excellent job!
Title: Snakes in London 01 Dec 2007 10:17 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Another interesting chapter! But, you know, you've got some nerve promising us Snape in the next chapter and then having us have to wait! Humph, the nerve of some peopele ;D Please post the next chapter soon! This story is really entertaining and differn't from most stories I've read. Little Harry cracks me up ^_^
Title: Snakes in London 01 Dec 2007 7:35 am
Reviewer: ScarlettPendragon (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Little Superhero Harry!!

    Having to eat out of bins and try to sleep in a washroom at Tescos!! I'm glad he got a bit of peace and quiet in that garden for the afternoon, as he's surely going to need it!! London can be a dangerous place, and I'm extremely worried for him!!

    It's amazing how he can make the abuse he's suffered at the Dursleys into a good thing by rationalizing it as him being a Superhero - and to the Wizarding world he is a hero!!

    Did none of the stupid wizard folk who saw him wandering about London by himself not stop to wonder why he was by himself?! Honestly!!

    Looking forward to seeing Severus - I'm still hoping that he'll sweep in to rescue Wee!Harry and not be an @ss to him!! (fingers crossed!!)
    Scarlett
Title: Snakes in London 30 Nov 2007 10:08 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's voice continues to charm. What a reasonable conclusion for him to draw--he's a superhero, not a freak. And I'm intrigued by the wizards spotting him and greeting him. I've never really thought before about how they manage to recognize him in canon. Do they just notice the scar, or is there some other way that wizards recognize another wizard among muggles? Now you've got me thinking.
Title: Snakes in London 30 Nov 2007 3:55 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, Harry's resourceful and naive...I can't wait to see what he makes out of Snape.
Title: Trains 26 Nov 2007 7:58 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I am very intrigued about how the snake was able to fog Harry's mind and get him to leave, and about why he would want to. But again, I think my favorite line was Harry feeling bad about leaving Jo and thinking that Jo deserved a better boyfriend. I can't wait to see Snape with this Harry.
Title: Aunt Marge 26 Nov 2007 7:36 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so terribly sweet. And I can just SEE lovely Jo enjoying every minute of Harry's conversation. She will probably be repeating the conversation to everyone for weeks and will tell all the men she knows that they can only be "fit" or "handsome" and to be "handsome" you had to be fat and stupid. Snicker.
Title: Trains 26 Nov 2007 5:53 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe, little Harry's a con-artist here. Seriously though, or should I say Siriusly, I hope you post the next chapter soon! Please?

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