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Reviews For Boy's Adventure
But, how is Snape going to find him now that he accidently apparated? Whew, Snape's probably not very happy with that.
Anyway, the dialogue is fabulous, and I absolutely loved how you opened the chapter with the conversation between Severus and Dumbledore. I can't wait until Snape appears again. I bet he won't be too happy with Harry. This is incredible. I almost leapt off the seat when I saw you'd updated. Keep them coming! Author's Response: Almost clicked report this when I meant to respond! That wouldn't have been good!
I have seen Charlie and Lola, actually. Lol, I used to put it on in the hopes that my little brother would forget the Tweenies and the Wiggles. No such luck, but it had to have been one of the most enjoyable kid's shows. I think about Charlie sometimes writing Harry haha. Funny you pointed it out.
And thank-you for all of your wonderful reviews! They make me so happy.
You've brilliantly written this story in first-person perspective, and I'm in awe of how well you pay attention to details. You've also added humor to this story, such as Harry talking about "fat ladies that have to be somewhere by three o'clock"... That really made me laugh. I'm anxiously awaiting Severus's arrival in the next chapter. I'm also curious as to whether or not he'll be civil to Harry. I'm guessing not. But regardless, I can't wait! Excellent job!
Having to eat out of bins and try to sleep in a washroom at Tescos!! I'm glad he got a bit of peace and quiet in that garden for the afternoon, as he's surely going to need it!! London can be a dangerous place, and I'm extremely worried for him!! It's amazing how he can make the abuse he's suffered at the Dursleys into a good thing by rationalizing it as him being a Superhero - and to the Wizarding world he is a hero!! Did none of the stupid wizard folk who saw him wandering about London by himself not stop to wonder why he was by himself?! Honestly!! Looking forward to seeing Severus - I'm still hoping that he'll sweep in to rescue Wee!Harry and not be an @ss to him!! (fingers crossed!!) Scarlett
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