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Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 10 Dec 2007 2:44 am
Reviewer: Tracy (Signed) [Report This]
    Must...have...more! Augh! I feel so sorry for both Draco and Harry! Harry because he has so many burdens and Draco because, even if he was a little bastard, he seems so utterly broken now. Then you go and add bloody notes from Snape! Oh, you really have to update this soon!
    Tracy
Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 02 Dec 2007 1:20 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Really exciting! Can't wait for more!!
Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 01 Dec 2007 10:48 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    AAH! Oh, dear Merlin!
    Poor Draco!
    I can't wait to see where you're going with this. I love your Ginny, she's so cool.
    -Elise
Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 01 Dec 2007 8:19 pm
Reviewer: Lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    SCREEECCCCH. You left us like this!!! How could you. Sobs. Please update soon. Excellent beginning and different too. I feel sorry for Harry as he seems to be walked on all over by the people around him. Looking forward to seeing Snape.
Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 01 Dec 2007 7:21 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I don't know how to express it more eloquently than that. This is an excellent story and I was thrilled to find a new one with lots of chapters all ready for me to read but did the chapters really have to end here???? Snape sending an owl to... who? Hermione? ... asking for help? I am not sure I can leave my computer before the next chapter is up. That's it, 4 day old grandson in the living room and I'm sitting here in my bedroom until you come up with another chapter. It'll be your fault if Maverick never gets to know his grandmother, you know!

    Author's Response:

    Aw, how cute! I nanny a ton and I love when they're so small and tiny and need you so much and can't talk back yet.

     I was supposed to work on chapters of other writing today, but I could throw something together for this story too.

     Thanks! 

Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 01 Dec 2007 6:27 pm
Reviewer: mamaduck (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I hope you don't leave us hanging long??
    Neville was great; I love his chivalry toward Luna. Poor Draco.
    And here comes Snape! (Drum roll.......)
    Write , write, write! I'm watching your other stories too- hint, hint! :~)
    Quinn
Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 01 Dec 2007 5:39 pm
Reviewer: ayana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    aahh cliffhanger D=

    well i absolutely adore this story! and please please update soon! *begs like narcissa*
Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 01 Dec 2007 12:31 pm
Reviewer: Caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh great start!
Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 01 Dec 2007 10:52 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW! What a cliff hanger, whoo! Fantastic start to this new story! I love the setting and development of the background! I think that you spent the perfect amount of time on it. I'm worried about Malfoy getting to the wand though. I can't wait to read the next chapter! No more starting new stories until you finish at least one you already have! Or I'll send Snape after you. LOL
Title: Chapter 4 - Shock 01 Dec 2007 7:54 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! I can't say I've been this excited about a WIP for awhile. This is just great, I feel like you're going to bring closure to a lot of the issues in the DH Epilogue that really bugged me.

    I know it looks bad now, with Draco chained up and everything, but I just love that Harry felt like he had to take him in and what I can imagine will come of it. And that last bit with Severus asking for help! It's just too exciting, I'm looking forward to see what's happening, though I hope he's alright.

    It seems like a lot of the adults have just gone a bit off the rails following the war. Which is understandable I guess. Is Mr Weasley as hardened as Arthur?

    I also have to say that I love that Luna and Neville will feature in this story a little, they're not in enough fics these days.

    So, I wonder if Harry will be anouncing that they have another room mate when he goes to help Severus? Hmm....

    Good luck with the next chapter!

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