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Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 19 Jan 2008 2:46 am
Reviewer: mkh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "African or European swallow-wort?"
    This has to be the best line in the chapter - Monty Python much? (For Christmas I gave my sister MP&THG on DVD, and her own rip apart Black Knight :) Not as cool as attacking screaming monkeys, but still cool.)

    Author's Response:

    Or attacking rabbits.  :) 

     Thank you for reviewing!  Cookie for you! 
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 7:47 pm
Reviewer: Hanka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Points?" the boy asked. "First time for everything, I suppose." That remark got him a jab in the ribs from Granger. He looked at her, and then noticed several classmates staring at him in puzzlement. "Ah…I mean, first time this month." More stares. "First time today?" he asked in astonishment.


    Snape decided to ignore both the comments and Potter and returned to his lecture. He relaxed marginally as he picked up the rhythm of his speech. Really, teaching would be far more pleasant if it weren't for the students.

    -This whole paragraph was just perfect!!!


    I'm really looking for more of this story, please don't take too long, it would kill me... Ok so it wouldn't, but still :-)

    Author's Response:

    Well, I certainly wouldn't want that!  Don't fret, I update frequently.  :)

Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 6:07 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! This chapter was excellent! Snape already seems a bit milder than usual. And I love Harry's cheekiness. You used great detail when describing Harry's appearance, such as how he entered the room scratching his palms, his untidy hair. I love your Harry--well, I love both of your Harrys, actually, but this one is particularly endearing. Keep up the amazing work! This story is definitely one of my favorites :)

    Author's Response: I’m surprised and delighted by the reception this Harry has gotten.  I guess he's a bit of a charmer!   Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 8:28 am
Reviewer: Lio Saoirse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good chappie!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 5:28 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 3:22 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "European or African swallow-wort?"

    LOL!!!!!! Perfect! We have a huge joke going on in my math class about Monty Python. Good chapter. I really enjoyed that line.

    Author's Response: Well, it is a simple question of weight ratios.  A five ounce bird could not carry a one pound coconut…  :) Cookie for you!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 3:06 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely class with this Harry showing he's the son of a potion's master. First time ever for points--snicker. And the tension with Ron and skewering Draco was a nice way to show how different this Harry is. Now I'm worrying about our poor potions-awful Harry in the other reality.

    Author's Response:

    Potions class is always fun.  :)  And we'll check in with our Harry in the next chapter.

     Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 2:24 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha one I am definite is Monty Python and the Holy Grail. Love the swallow part.

    That was great, I like this Harry's spunk. It's probably just that he's not really even a little bit scared of Severus which is fun. Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    Cookie!  :)

     Yep, Harry's treating our Snape like "his" Snape, and expecting the same reactions he gets at home.  He just perceives Snape differently, and acts accordingly.  Much to Snape's chagrin.  :)
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 2:04 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, fantastic chapter! It's so interesting to see this other Harry interact with all of our Harry's friends and enemies. But he mentioned Lily! Wow. I did not see that coming, and i'm sure the class is all befuzzled as to what they could possibly mean. Great chapter, fantastic tension and movement of events. I was hardly aware that I was reading, it was done so well.

    Author's Response:

    It's fun to have everyone try and treat this Harry the way they used to, and get confounded by his different reactions. 

     

    And wow, that's a lovely compliment, to say that you were hardly aware you were reading.  I hope future chapters draw you in as well.  Thank you very much. 

Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 12:56 am
Reviewer: Aga (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story!
    Monty Python and the Holy Grail. It is mz favourite film too. I still can not stop laughing.

    Author's Response: Cookie for you!  Yeah, there are so many good quotes from that movie.  "Brave Sir Robin ran away..."

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