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Reviews For Come What May
Author's Response: I know what you mean, you will just have to wait and see about Harrry & Ginny. Harry has to much on his mind right now to worry about girls. Lol :) Thanks for the review! :)
Author's Response: You’re awful sweet Beth! :D Thank you for making the twenty first review so enjoyable and inspiring! I just hope I can continue to please you and the other reviewers that have been so thoughtful and nice. I always wanted the Weasleys closer to Harry in the book and Fred and George giving Harry the nickname (Harrikins) is the first step. J How can I resist puppy dog eyes? Lol I am writing chapter three now. J This story should continue to have long chapters, I like long chapters. Scorpia
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Yes, it might have been easier for poor Harry to just tell Snape. But Harry doesn't trust Snape enough to know for sure that Snape won't place him in a asylum. Hehe :) I was scared that Snape wouldn't be in character, I'm glad you think he's at his worst! Lol ;) Thanks for the review! Scorpia
I love that older Harry gave young Harry homework tips. lol. Can't wait for the next chapter! -Elise Author's Response: Aw! Your so sweet Elise! I'm glad you found the line from Letter to me! Lol I will give you a cokereward code later. :) I am trying to write a lot right now, but I will try to get the next chapter to you soon. :D Scorpia
Author's Response: Interesting's good! Lol I'm glad you like the start, hopefully you'll like the middle and the end! :) Thanks for reviewing, thry make me very happy! (Claps) :) Scorpia
You do need to watch your grammar though, and I have to agree with the reviewer who asked about "conscious" vs. "conscience". Conscious means awake whereas conscience is that nagging voice in the back of your mind. You misuse the former in several places. Take this line from chapter 1, for instance: "Harry sometimes found it disturbing that his conscious sounded like Hermione." You mean conscience here, not conscious. On a plot note, am I being too cynical if I ask how long it's going to take Harry to lose that book and which wrong hands it may fall into? I know you can't answer that, but I'm bracing myself for the worst. I'm also looking forward to the next chapter. Happy writing! Author's Response: I thought I fixed that bit with the "conscious" & "conscience" thing but I will go back and make sure! :) I didn't plan on Harry losing the book but maybe I'll put it in and blame the cliff-hanger on you! Lol (Evil Grin) Sorry, that was MEAN! I get excited when I receive reviews! :) Thanks for the nice, long review! I hope I don't dissapoint you with the rest of the story! :( Scorpia
Author's Response: Glad you liked it Anna! I plan on updating as soon as I can but don't expect a update for a few weeks. Scorpia
Thank you. Author's Response: What Dudley wanted doesn't effect the plot so I'll tell you. :) Dudley needed money to help his family and he wanted to be forgiven for treating Harry the way he did and for other stuff that does effect the plot. Glad you liked it! Scorpia
Author's Response: Yeah, Harry is going to be doing a lot of training and not just with spells! :) I felt embaresed for Harry when he used Expelliarmus in DH. Did J.K want Harry to look like a moron? Because she did a very good job! Lol Thanks for reviewing! Scorpia
Author's Response: Harry's apology is most likely my fave part in this chapter, I wish Snape would have taken him seriously, but's it's just to early for that. I have to torment them first, (grins evily.) I will try to update soon. Thanks for the review! Scorpia |
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