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Reviews For Real Illusions
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! The prologue was the worst one to write, really. You know how you want to develop the story, but you don't know how to start. It's really angsty, those three pages took years to write ^_^
Scorpia Author's Response: Well, some Dumbledore bashing will have to occur, I am afraid ^_^. I know he loves Harry, but he really overlooked things in this case, so he'll have to atone for it :)
I felt so sorry for Harry. It's hard enough, all but unbearable trying to cope with the loss of a loved one in the first weeks and months after it happens. But besides his grief, he also has to deal with the abuse and hatred of his 'family' , the very people who should care. It's really very hard to think about. And Dumbledore should have known better! Author's Response: Thank for your review ^_^ I am soo happy you like the story and I'm really honored, because I love yours so much. In this story I actually wanted to try and see things from a different perspective, because Harry has always been left to his own devices (even though in canon he certainly was not abused as much as in my story, but I do think it was abuse nevertheless) and even though he managed to grow into a lovely boy, it does not mean that he did not suffer from it. And Dumbledore... I am sure he really loves Harry, but loving someone does not mean that you'll let him be treated like that. Ok, he did need the blood protection, but still... blood protections cannot defend dead people, isn't it? And now I'd better get writing once more :) English is not my first language, so it takes a while before I can write things well enough, and tonight I am not feeling "Englishy" at all, which means I'll probably have to rewrite half the chapter tomorrow night :) I hate it when I seem to be writing everything BUT English! Thanks again for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you! My wonderful beta had a few pc problems so I'm running a bit late, but the next chapter will be posted in the next couple of days and the next to next one is already over 1200 words, so will be soon ready as well ^_^
Poor Harry!((( Author's Response: Well, I do have to set the setting, isn't i? :) Don't worry things will get better... maybe :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I am working on the next chapters already. One chapter is being beta-ed and another one is on the way ^_^
Author's Response: Hello! I am so happy you like it. Next chapter is written already and being beta-ed, So I am working on chapter 3 ^_^;; So far I tried to set the setting so to speak, I hope you'll like the developing of the story!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Yes, I am trying to set the tone for the next part of the stories. I thought that if I wanted Harry and Severus to interact in a real way and build a relationship between them, then I had to prepare the setting carefully. Next chapter is on the way as well. Still "preparation", but with much more action and... I won't spoil it yet :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I am so glads you like it! Next chapter is almost ready (written and being beta-ed) so I'll post as soon as possible. I just wanted to start with a nice prologue, did not want to rush things, but now things are going to get more interesting! |
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