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Title: Repercussions 29 Jun 2008 6:27 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    An excellent chapter and very well written. I especially liked the conversation between Severus and Minerva. I look forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I am happy you liked it, because it took me ages to write. I am really bad at dialogues and I need hours of "polishing" after I write them ^_^
Title: Repercussions 29 Jun 2008 4:45 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I really love how you worked everything out. Snape, Dumbledore and McGonagal have all accepted their part in the blame and are all thinking back to what should have been. It's not unusual to find this in a story, but it's unusual to find it done so well. The need for Harry to express his feelings was worked out beautifully, too, with a needed potion and it's after effects. I love it! If you're still looking for a beta, I'd love to help. It's always an honor to help authors who really work with the characters themselves, and what is in their hearts.

    Author's Response:

    Hello!

    Thanks for reviewing! I am so happy you like it! I am trying to provide Harry with a family of his own, somehow, it does not matter how strange it will turn out to be. I just want him to be able to receive the support he obviously needs ^_^

    And he needs to let go of all the pain he has been storing inside for so long, and since he is a stubborn Gryffindor I decided to help with a potion. How Slytherin of me LOL.

    Thank you for offering to be my beta. I am really happy to accept your offer and I will contact you soon by e-mail. Thanks again!

Title: Repercussions 29 Jun 2008 1:06 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! I'm sorry about your beta's, i hope things work out.
    Thanks for updating.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your understanding! I am not a native English speaker and I worry about my style and grammar. I am really happy you liked this chapter, because it was very hard to write ^_^

Title: Repercussions 29 Jun 2008 12:58 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you found time to update! Good chapter and I hope you'll update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I am working on the next chapter already. I just hope nothing forces me to stop, this time!
Title: Repercussions 29 Jun 2008 12:39 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you're back! This was a good chapter. I thought you gave Snape the responsibility of Harry very nicely.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! It was a difficult chapter to write, for me. I started it in April and I finished it a few days ago. In the meanwhile I had no time to write, but I did think a lot about what I wanted to write, so in the end putting everything together was pretty stressful :)

    As for poor Snape... well, if Dumbledore asked him, he'd find a way to refuse or feel compelled to do it. But since Dumbledore is busy looking for a new family for Harry... he is the only one who can make sure that he is well protected. Dumbledore outsmarted him and even if Severus knows... he just has to admit that Albus is right. I am proud of that part :)


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