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Title: The truth will out - Part 1 28 Feb 2008 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I feel so bad for Harry...poor thing, he's so hurt, but I am glad that Severus was there and was able to put aside his old feelings and be gentle because that's what Harry needs. I do hope that Severus won't revert back to his old ways completely now. I don't expect him to be all mushy, but it would be a big step for him, now that he's had to admit he was wrong about Harry, to try to make an effort to be more understanding and supportive.

    British English is great with me, too. I agree that since HP is British, it's more authentic to write that way, although to me, characterization and plot matter more than whether the story is in American or British. Your story is wonderful in both terms. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your review ^_^.

    Deciding to use British English was a hard decision, both of them are foreign languages anyway, but British English sounds more... potterish ^_^. Hope it makes sense.

    I am very happy you like the story. Writing this chapter was really difficult, because I want Severus to change his attitude towards Harry, but it can't be overnight. We are talking about Severus Snape here! :) So I will just take it slowly (not too much hopefully!) and try to make both boys understand that they have to behave and help each other, even though they are both very stubborn and proud. But since Severus is the adult here, he will have to be more careful from now on.

    Thanks again for reading!

Title: The truth will out - Part 1 28 Feb 2008 6:40 pm
Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you're still writing, because I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :)

    Author's Response: I am writing, I promise! I just need a little more time to round up the story ^_^. Thanks for reading!
Title: The truth will out - Part 1 28 Feb 2008 6:00 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    This was my fave chapter yet! I can't wait to read more so please update as soon as you can!
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: I am soooo happy you like it, really! I am writing next chapter already, I try to post asap!
Title: Back Home 28 Feb 2008 5:53 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I hope Harry's ok! The was a really great chapter! The characters were perfection! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I tried so hard to keep the characters... in character ^_^. I want a good Harry/Severus story, but I want it to be real.

    Thanks again! 

Title: The long way home 28 Feb 2008 5:46 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, :) I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I a writing the next chapter, but it will take a few more days!
Title: Prologue 28 Feb 2008 5:43 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    So is this a Dumbledore bashing fic? I'm going to read the nextc hapter now!
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: Well, some Dumbledore bashing will have to occur, I am afraid ^_^. I know he loves Harry, but he really overlooked things in this case, so he'll have to atone for it :)
Title: The truth will out - Part 1 28 Feb 2008 5:33 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, British is good for me! Sorry if people complained though. You just keep on doing your thing. My mom just reccd this fic to me this morning and I'll have you know I ignored my kids all morning so I could read it! LOL

    Great story. I really love your Snape. I like the thoughts you've put into his little head. I feel so badly for Harry though. Poor Kid. I am glad you did both POVs this chapter. Very good job.

    And yay, that Snape doesn't want to triumph over this. I hope he can take good care of our Harry. Thanks, Tsuby. I am really like this story so far. :o)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your review! And I am sorry for your kids, I feel a bit guilty now ^_^, but I am sure they managed to entertain themselved and I must say I really love your mum's taste ^_____^

    I am so happy you like my story, I have been trying to give some prospective and character's depth to both Harry and Severus, but sometimes it's really difficult and, for this chapter alone, I had to rewrite some paragraphs many times. I should have written a fiction about Neville or something like that, Harry and Severus are way too stubborn to deal with! :)) 

    Now that I finally managed to have them understand each other a bit more, I just have to convince them that they can be good to each other! 

Title: The truth will out - Part 1 28 Feb 2008 12:54 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, whichever English works for you works for me. Just don't stop telling the story! It's excellent and this chapter was sad but heartwarming. Snape examining his culpability was a perfect way for him to react to what's happening. Not many people write that into their stories. Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your understanding! It really was an issue for me :)  And I am so happy you like the story. I have a sketch of the story in my mind, but it is difficult to put it on paper just because I want things to "fit", I don't want them happening by chance.

    I am already working on next chapter though ^_^

Title: Back Home 24 Feb 2008 9:09 pm
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Story

    Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll like the next chapters as well!
Title: Back Home 20 Feb 2008 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh! I love this! It's so good, I can't wait for more! Poor Harry! I love it!
    -Elise

    Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is almost ready!

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