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Reviews For Real Illusions
British English is great with me, too. I agree that since HP is British, it's more authentic to write that way, although to me, characterization and plot matter more than whether the story is in American or British. Your story is wonderful in both terms. Anyway, I'm looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thanks for your review ^_^. Deciding to use British English was a hard decision, both of them are foreign languages anyway, but British English sounds more... potterish ^_^. Hope it makes sense. I am very happy you like the story. Writing this chapter was really difficult, because I want Severus to change his attitude towards Harry, but it can't be overnight. We are talking about Severus Snape here! :) So I will just take it slowly (not too much hopefully!) and try to make both boys understand that they have to behave and help each other, even though they are both very stubborn and proud. But since Severus is the adult here, he will have to be more careful from now on. Thanks again for reading!
Author's Response: I am writing, I promise! I just need a little more time to round up the story ^_^. Thanks for reading!
Scorpia Author's Response: I am soooo happy you like it, really! I am writing next chapter already, I try to post asap!
Author's Response: Thanks! I tried so hard to keep the characters... in character ^_^. I want a good Harry/Severus story, but I want it to be real. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thanks! I a writing the next chapter, but it will take a few more days!
Scorpia Author's Response: Well, some Dumbledore bashing will have to occur, I am afraid ^_^. I know he loves Harry, but he really overlooked things in this case, so he'll have to atone for it :)
Great story. I really love your Snape. I like the thoughts you've put into his little head. I feel so badly for Harry though. Poor Kid. I am glad you did both POVs this chapter. Very good job. And yay, that Snape doesn't want to triumph over this. I hope he can take good care of our Harry. Thanks, Tsuby. I am really like this story so far. :o) Author's Response: Thanks for your review! And I am sorry for your kids, I feel a bit guilty now ^_^, but I am sure they managed to entertain themselved and I must say I really love your mum's taste ^_____^ I am so happy you like my story, I have been trying to give some prospective and character's depth to both Harry and Severus, but sometimes it's really difficult and, for this chapter alone, I had to rewrite some paragraphs many times. I should have written a fiction about Neville or something like that, Harry and Severus are way too stubborn to deal with! :)) Now that I finally managed to have them understand each other a bit more, I just have to convince them that they can be good to each other!
Author's Response: Thanks for your understanding! It really was an issue for me :) And I am so happy you like the story. I have a sketch of the story in my mind, but it is difficult to put it on paper just because I want things to "fit", I don't want them happening by chance. I am already working on next chapter though ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll like the next chapters as well!
-Elise Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is almost ready! |
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