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Reviews For An Old Man's Meddling
Excellent chapter! How about Snape's POV, and set before Harry awakened. How about you make the creature's venom be poisonous? Heheheh, add a bit more suspense? Snape could use something to soften him up, and if worrying about Harry does that, Do it. Great chapter! Loving it! Shadow
Dumbledore really had fun with that bit. hehehehe. Nice job with his character. really well done. Shadow
Definitely 10. Worth the read. If you can keep me interested, which is hard, you'll definitely gain ground. Keep writing!
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