| Title: Snowflakes and Memories
| 08 Mar 2008 4:31 pm
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| Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed)
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Boy, you did you ever rise to the challenge! You did a wonderful job of leading me through Severus' emotions and I could feel all of them. Loved the sprites...a very original idea.
And my two favorite guys get to be happy in the end. *smiles* Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much I loved writing this story! And my stories usually have a happy ending too!
| Title: Snowflakes and Memories
| 08 Mar 2008 10:57 am
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| Reviewer: Spork (Signed)
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Wonderfully done! Very sweet and just have to say aww. Only one small problem, you said it was a year since Lily died. But you pointed out the Harry was only 15 months old, he should have been around 27 months old. Otherwise great work.
Author's Response: You're right and thanks for telling me, I will correct it!
| Title: Snowflakes and Memories
| 08 Mar 2008 7:39 am
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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That was really great. It gave me happy chills. I love your Lily and Snape here and the wind sprite was a wonderful addition. I really enjoyed this. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and I had a grea ttime writing it!
awww that was cute. Great work.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I had a lot of fun writing it!
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