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Reviews For The Truth About Tomorrow
Author's Response: Yup, I'm really trying to keep Severus and Harry's home lives different while they both contain similar episodes throughout them. And you'll learn more about all these things in later chapters, don't worry, all and any questions will hopefully be brought up and answers given. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Glad to see you intrigued! Thanks for letting me know!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate you taking the time to review! I hope that you do enjoy this fic, as it begins to unravel in further chapters. The dream/flashback will be explained (indirectly) in the next chapter and in ones following when we're in Severus' point of view. Thanks again! I'm glad I got your attention!
I feel so sad for Harry. He's so accepting of everything that's happening to him. It's really devastating. The spiders. I know I already said his was such a great part. But really it is. He's got no one so this really tugs at my heart that he's talking to these spiders. Poor Harry. And it breaks my heart again that he is so grateful to Petunia for doing something so ordinary as giving him food! I just want to smack that lady, I really do. I can't wait for Severus to get in the picture here. That part with the memory was so hard to read. You're really making me nervous with all this meanness. I hope things get better soon or I am going to have a permanent knot in my stomach. I love your chapter title. It's haunting. Great job, PK! Author's Response:
Thanks, OE! I learn from the best. And of course the Dursleys are in need of dire retribution...perhaps that's to come...hmm... Harry really needs some hugs and perhaps some real friends too, spiders just won't cut it forever. I think Petunia needs a good smacking! Please do, I can't seem to get through to the lady!! Hmm...will things get better? Isn't the saying: things have to get worse before they get better? We'll see. Oh, thanks, I love how I don't really have to come up with my own chapter titles...songs make the perfect ones sometimes! Thanks for reviewing here too! Now, back to work with you!!
Perhaps the worst thing is sense of being trapped, that no matter what Harry does, it will never be enough to please them, that he can be blamed for anything that goes wrong, and they won't even give him a chance to explain or believe him. The Dursleys just look for things to blame on Harry. Mrs. Mason is making me really angry, too. She has a responsibility to watch out for all the children in her care, and anyone with half a brain should be able to see that all of Harry's bruises, not to mention his small size, are classic symptoms of abuse. The woman needs her teaching license taken away, at the very least. And when poor Harry suffered those horrible nightmares and was so afraid that he'd woken his relatives, well, I just wanted to give him a big hug, poor little thing. Can't wait for Severus to show up! Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far! I don't understand the reasons behind their abuse either, just because a child is "different" gives you no excuse to hurt them. And that's true too, that the Dursleys just look for stuff to blame on Harry. It's quite sad that he has to accept and adapt to all their shortcomings as well as what few he might have himself. Lol about Mrs. Mason, don't worry. She's not coming back up into the limelight. But, she IS friends with Petunia, so what do you expect? Me?...this, complete worship of Dudley and hatred for Harry. And yeah, she should have her liscense taken away... I'm pretty sure Harry could use a lot of hugs in this chapter. And Severus is coming soon, don't worry! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Harry is ten years old, this is the summer of his eleventh birthday. Thanks for reviewing! |
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