|
Reviews For The Truth About Tomorrow
I just adore Siles in here. Like a sad friend for Harry. I am really looking forward to seeing Sev's reaction to the snake. YAY. I think my favorite part was when Harry almost fell out of the window with Siles. ROFL It was pretty funny. I can't wait for the next chapter and I am really looking forward to Sev finally understanding what those horrid Dursley's did to him. You're writing Severus so well. I love how he goes between being a git and being caring. Very well-balanced and fun to read. Great chapter, PK~ Author's Response: Oh, thanks...*blushes* It is actually more fun to write their POV shifts closer together like that, to have the confusion run through their minds for the first time, rather than minutes afterwords, as if they're pondering everything. That's booring...action and real-time angst is fun! You're exactly right, Harry doesn't have a clue how to be normal and Sev doesn't know that he doesn't know. But I like it like that... Tee hee, Siles is going to cause some trouble before Sev realizes what's going on...I think I've got a few ideas... But it should be fun when he does realize the truth. Glad Sev's in character and balanced, but he's got to be clueless for a little while yet. We'll see what happens when I finish the chapter...whenever that'll be. *sigh* Thanks, OE!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I do really appreciate all the praise...*looks away sheepishly* It is sad that Harry just doesn't understand how things are supposed to really go, but that's what Sev's there for, whether he realizes it or not. I'm so glad I'm able to keep him in character too, that's definatly the one thing I obsess over. My discriptions are vivid?! Really!? Cool! I never saw them as that...merely booring blocks of text to set the scene that were agonizingly hard to write and keep relatively slow in comparison to the conversation parts. Ok. I'm glad you are enjoying it so much! Thanks for the great review!! I'm certainly trying to keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yup, Harry's going to have to learn fast, or Sev's going to have to explain fast what's going on...we'll see what happens. I hope I can update soon too, but this chapters proving to be a toughie! |
Powered by eFiction 3.5 |