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Title: Frost and Front Steps 29 Jun 2008 7:27 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Quite an interesting fic. I hope you continue it soon.
Title: Frost and Front Steps 01 Jun 2008 6:25 pm
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. This is going to be a veryyy interesting adjustment for them both. I hope Severus realizes things soon!
Title: Frost and Front Steps 27 May 2008 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Aytheria (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, this is definitely one of the better sevitus i've read yet. very very in character, and poor harry! i wonder how long it will take snape to figure it out? in any case, i adore the father/son interaction and hope you update soon :)
Title: Frost and Front Steps 01 May 2008 8:17 am
Reviewer: Lina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful beginning. I hope that Snape realizes what is wrong soon though. I also wonder when he will notice that Harry can talk to snakes since Harry is so quiet and all that?
Title: Frost and Front Steps 27 Apr 2008 4:15 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this chapter, but hee hee you already knew that. :oP I really like the POV shifts in this chapter, to allow us to see what both of them are thinking. It is very well done. And, I have to say, of course your descriptions are vivid. How could you not think so? You give just the right amount of details to set the scene and I love as well the thoughts you give us from both Sev and Harry. I feel so bad for Harry in this. he has no clue how to be normal and Severus has no clue that he doesn't know. Oh, the angst! Oh, the tension.
    I just adore Siles in here. Like a sad friend for Harry. I am really looking forward to seeing Sev's reaction to the snake. YAY. I think my favorite part was when Harry almost fell out of the window with Siles. ROFL It was pretty funny. I can't wait for the next chapter and I am really looking forward to Sev finally understanding what those horrid Dursley's did to him. You're writing Severus so well. I love how he goes between being a git and being caring. Very well-balanced and fun to read. Great chapter, PK~

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thanks...*blushes*

    It is actually more fun to write their POV shifts closer together like that, to have the confusion run through their minds for the first time, rather than minutes afterwords, as if they're pondering everything.  That's booring...action and real-time angst is fun! 

    You're exactly right, Harry doesn't have a clue how to be normal and Sev doesn't know that he doesn't know.  But I like it like that...

    Tee hee, Siles is going to cause some trouble before Sev realizes what's going on...I think I've got a few ideas...  But it should be fun when he does realize the truth.

    Glad Sev's in character and balanced, but he's got to be clueless for a little while yet.  We'll see what happens when I finish the chapter...whenever that'll be.  *sigh*

    Thanks, OE!!!

Title: Frost and Front Steps 27 Apr 2008 2:12 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I could definitely sense the tension in the scene between Harry and Severus at the dinner table. It's sad to think that Harry is confused about the simple things..like being able to eat at the table with utensils... And of course, Snape wouldn't understand that. I love how you kept him in character--a bit callous and definitely cautious. Your descriptions are so vivid, and you write extremely well! I love this story; keep up the excellent work :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much!  I do really appreciate all the praise...*looks away sheepishly*

    It is sad that Harry just doesn't understand how things are supposed to really go, but that's what Sev's there for, whether he realizes it or not.  I'm so glad I'm able to keep him in character too, that's definatly the one thing I obsess over.

    My discriptions are vivid?!  Really!?  Cool!  I never saw them as that...merely booring blocks of text to set the scene that were agonizingly hard to write and keep relatively slow in comparison to the conversation parts.  Ok.

    I'm glad you are enjoying it so much!  Thanks for the great review!!  I'm certainly trying to keep it up!

Title: Frost and Front Steps 26 Apr 2008 6:52 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter. I liked how you switched from Sev's POV to Harry's. It helped see what each person was thinking. Poor Harry is going to have to learn Severus' rules quickly otherwise the man will lose his patience with the boy. Great chapter and I hope you can update again soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!

    Yup, Harry's going to have to learn fast, or Sev's going to have to explain fast what's going on...we'll see what happens.

    I hope I can update soon too, but this chapters proving to be a toughie!


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