| Title: Best Laid Plans
| 16 May 2008 6:01 pm
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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loved this chapter I loved how dumbldores plans are falling apart. and that severus and remus both told him off also neviels grandmother. love baby harry severus and remus would both be great teachers for him.
Author's Response: Hope you continue to enjoy it.
This is an intriguing blend of many elements. I've never watched the vampire series, but you are doing a good job of subtly letting us know what is going on. I can't wait to see who gets picked as Harry's betrothed, and I'm intrigued by Harry's dreaming.
Author's Response: Thanks! Harry's dreams came out of left field for me, as these things sometimes do. I will say that he may not end up with his betrothed in the end.
Strange story to tell a four year old, but overall, a very sweet chapter. Keep up the good work, and update soon!
Author's Response: Nicolas is doing his best to prepare Henri for what will happen. He knows that he can't hide Harry forever, as much as he might wish to.
Cool story..........Dumbledore isn't too happy is he? hehehehe I hope Severus comes into Harry's life soon. :) Waiting on the edge of my seat anticipating what happens next. One question.........is Henri's name on the magical children's list in the book?
Author's Response: No, he's not. At least, not on the conventional list. My thoughts are that children from other countries that don't have magical schools appear on a seperate list. I think that they'd get letters from other schools and be able to choose.
| Title: Best Laid Plans
| 15 May 2008 9:28 am
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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Huzzah for the update *cheers* I really enjoyed the bits and pieces of backstory you're showing, and clearly Henri is going to be very talented. The vampiric memory - is that kind of like photographic memory?
Author's Response: Try total recall. :) At any time, a vampire can literally relive any part of their lives... Glad you're enjoying the story.
| Title: Best Laid Plans
| 15 May 2008 7:32 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Fascinating.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Awww, this story is wonderful. I'm really anticipating older Harry. Just lovely.
One small thing -
Je suis faim means "I am hunger".
J'ai faim = I am hungry (I have hunger).
Author's Response: Thanks. Will fix that. :)
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