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Reviews For Midnight Watch
Title: Family 18 Sep 2008 1:05 am
Reviewer: Ash (Signed) [Report This]
    I discovered it just now, so didn't have to wait for the third chapter. I am unfamiliar with the FK universe, though I've encountered it in crosses before. It is easy to follow here, so that is great.

    I am looking forward to seeing how this develops, how changed, and in what way, Harry will be. To be frank, one thing almost put me off, and that is the Ginny inclusion which is completely unnecessary, not to mention seems very artificial - you wanted her there, and it wasn't natural. Depending how this part goes I may yet give up, as I loathe Harry/Ginny stories and am yet to find one that has something better to offset it.

    Anyway, am still reading as I like it so far, but if we see more of Ginny, and soon ... well ... thanks for this so far.

    Author's Response: There are solid reasons behind the inclusion of the Weasleys at this point.  The wizarding world is not tolerant of dark creatures, and Henri's birth identity cannot be kept secret forever.  The betrothal is more for purposes of calming the populace than for a marriage to actually occur.    Frankly, at this point, I'm leaning towards it *not* working and Henri marrying someone else in the end.  There's time yet; Henri isn't yet at Hogwarts.
Title: Family 17 Sep 2008 6:41 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    The chapter was worth the wait. I am finding the vampire clan very interesting and you are doing a good job of establishing a distinct character for each person. Harry is very appealing and believable. You did a good job explaining his over-maturity for his age. I can't wait to see what is going on with Severus after the hints you gave in this chapter. I also enjoyed the peek at the Weasleys. I enjoy stories that accept that they are pureblooded wizards even if they aren't Malfoy-type purebloods.

    Author's Response: I won't guarentee that Harry will end up with Ginny.  Right now I'm leaning towards not, actually.  :) I'm on a Harry/Susan Bones kick at the moment.    I'm glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully, I'll be able to update again soon--I've just gotten a really good team of betas to go over it...

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