Thanks for your story. It was heartbreaking, but so beautifully written.
Wow, this story was amazing!!! I love how you didn't turn snape into some over the top motherly character, you kept his character very subtle. I think you should write another story like this it expand on this one, because this was so great to read!!
| Title: Twelve Hundred Hours
| 10 Aug 2010 6:02 am
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| Reviewer: pthgrl (Anonymous)
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| Title: Twelve Hundred Hours
| 06 Jun 2010 9:15 am
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| Reviewer: Whitetail (Anonymous)
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Wow, I loved it. Though I must say the Sirius is in love with your father kind of made me go 'Eww' because all of that stuff just weirds me out. However, You are a fantastic writer and this is the first fan-fic I have ever read (and I've read a lot) that it is written well in present tense. Normally people butcher present tense, you however, thrive on it. Oh yes, and I love the plot; the ending was positively smashing! Keep writing! :)
Wow! Great stuff! I really enjoyed reading about their Occulmency lesson so this felt like a lovely follow up. Well done! Thanks for continuing!
| Title: Twelve Hundred Hours
| 19 May 2008 12:16 am
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| Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Anonymous)
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Wow that was really good, the ending was wonderful and totally unexpected, but yet expected at the same time, it makes sense now why Snape would get jealous and angry of Sirius and want to tarnish his memory.
Brilliant!!! Oh need more, but alas :( its finished, probably a good place to finish unless you want to write a novel?lol no? okay.
Author's Response: Well, if you check out my profile you'll find my ff.net account. There's a story there called "Girl In the War" that covers Rose and Snape's relationship through her seventh year, but be warned that it isn't strictly gen by the end. I have two more stories in the works about Rose, but I don't dare make any promises about when they'll be finished. Thanks for reading!
I think I've read another one of your stories before, the one with the 'romantic content' because I read it on ff.net and could not find it on here. There were quite a few of these, sir, I think it was an editing mistake. I guess you did not look at the chapter before you posted it. I realy liked this though although I don't like slash. But there was only a slight mention of it. Good job, I like the way you write Rose. Rose is probably the only girl Harry I really like.
Scorpia
Author's Response: Thanks for the heads up, I fixed all the italics html errors.
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