Wow, great chapter! I loved the healing scene. I also loved the way Snape is handling things and trying to put his misconceptions behind him. He's very in character. Good chapter, and thank you for the update!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much! The healing scene was really interesting to write, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks again. - August Sky
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| 03 Jun 2008 5:15 am
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Glad to see a new chapter! I really like this story. Can't wait to see where you take it!
Author's Response: Thanks! - Augst Sky
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| 03 Jun 2008 4:54 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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New & exciting!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! - August Sky
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| 03 Jun 2008 4:31 am
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| Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous)
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I am glad that Sev and Madam Pomfrey were able to heal Harry and really find out all that Harry would not say i.e. the abuse he has suffered. However I am surprised that they did not question the fact (maybe in private they can discuss it later and it is definitely something to bring up with Dumbledore) that the burns Harry had would have happened very recently within the last few weeks and therefore would not have been the Dursleys and that it would have been impossible for it to be self-inflicted, therefore it had to have happened at the Weasleys.
I like quick updates.
Author's Response: Severus, at this point, doesn't care enough about Harry to know where he was other than at the Dursleys for the summer. Although, it will come to light eventually, I can tell you that. Thanks! - August Sky
| Title: Apperception
| 03 Jun 2008 3:35 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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Gee, were all those hints your way of saying this is going to be a dream??? I like it too much for that!
Author's Response: Oh, no no no no no no. I would only ever even think of doing something like that in a parody fic, and then I'd still be loathe to do it. The hints are simply so you don't believe that Molly Weasley is abusing Harry. However, Harry believes he is being hurt by Molly Weasley. Does that help at all?? Haha.
| Title: Apperception
| 03 Jun 2008 1:23 am
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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Great work on the update. I especially like the way Severus recognises that most healers wouldn't let him treat their patients that way; clearly there's a bit of history between them. I'd prefer longer chapters like this one. Is Mrs Weasley under the Imperius?
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, most Healers would throw Snape out of the room for how he treats Harry then try to coddle the boy, but Severus works his own way. And I won't say if Mrs. Weasley is or isn't under Imperius, cause that would rather give a lot a way. :) Thanks again! - August Sky
Awesome chapter. I like that Snape's mind immediately jumps to the Dursleys without even considering the possibility that someone else was abusing Harry.
Author's Response: Thank you. Snape doesn't care enough about Harry at this point to know he was anywhere other than his 'home' at the Dursleys. He'd have heard from Dumbledore a thousand times how they weren't the epitomy of Muggles. Thanks again. - August Sky
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