Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Culpable 21 Jun 2008 10:14 am
Reviewer: darkwish (Signed) [Report This]
    ooooooooooooh boy, malfoy and potter bonding? will the world come to an end? who raped ginny?

    Author's Response: Bonding may be a strong word. lol Setting aside their differences may be a smidge more realistic. As for what happened to Ginny, it's coming soon. -August Sky
Title: Culpable 20 Jun 2008 4:38 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hm, that wasn't a very smary thing to do, Harry. At least Draco was able to stop the blood flow. Good chapter and I hope you'll update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks! - August Sky
Title: Culpable 19 Jun 2008 9:01 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    You are learning evil cliff hanger habits from others, aren't you (Looking at you, Tabitha).

    I enjoyed Draco saving Harry. It is usually the other way around.

    I hope Malfoy doesn't punish Draco for loss of the telescope.

    Author's Response:

    Learning evil cliff hanger habits? What? *Looks around innocently.* Oh, you can't tell me that they're not enjoyable, if not a tad suspenseful! lol Thanks again. - August Sky.

Title: Culpable 19 Jun 2008 8:48 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting dynamics in this chapter. I think I'm looking forward to the mediation even if the Slytherins hate it. ;-) I like your take that Draco is a very emotional boy--even as Snape is an emotional man in canon. A lot of people don't catch it, but they both are. I have a small quibble with this phrase--"Severus stood, creaking his aging bones". Severus is about 37 at this point and a wizard to boot. I don't know many 37 yo men who really would experience this, especially not if they are wiry and active like Severus, imho.
Title: Culpable 19 Jun 2008 8:21 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A horrible 'cliffie', but actually not a bad way to end the chapter. So Draco has a reason to hate Harry totally unconnected to his behavior, or at least how he interacts with Draco. It's no wonder Draco would despise Harry if his father treats him like that! It will ultimately be a bonding situation, won't it? If Harry starts acting with Draco to avoid such situations while manuevering things the way he wants, then Draco would turn into a willing cohort!
Title: Culpable 19 Jun 2008 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!! I'm glad that Draco was the one who found them, maybe they can start focusing on their similarities and help one another now. I'm sure this meeting with Snape will not be comfortable for Harry.
Title: Culpable 19 Jun 2008 6:43 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!!
Title: Culpable 19 Jun 2008 1:03 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    *raises pitchfork, calls up mob*

    Yes. That was an evil way to end the chapter. You did a good job on describing how Harry was feeling when he cut himself (and how it began, which links into Draco showing up), but it does seem a little unrealistic that he cut the words 'I'm sorry'. Just something to think about. I look forward to seeing what exactly this meditation entails.
Title: Culpable 19 Jun 2008 11:32 am
Reviewer: romantiscue (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Loved Draco's POV, and what we learned about him.
    However, I'm curious as to what happened to Ginny's conversation with Severus? (The one mentioned in chapter one?)
    Keep it up, can't wait for an update!
Title: Culpable 19 Jun 2008 11:23 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    hey! fantastic chapter. absolutely loved it. when will the next chapter be up???

    ps...did u mean MEDITATION as in the calming technique or did you mean MEDIATION where people get together to solve disputes? was just wondering.

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