|
Reviews For Shadows of Desperation
Author's Response: Bonding may be a strong word. lol Setting aside their differences may be a smidge more realistic. As for what happened to Ginny, it's coming soon. -August Sky
Author's Response: Thanks! - August Sky
I enjoyed Draco saving Harry. It is usually the other way around. I hope Malfoy doesn't punish Draco for loss of the telescope. Author's Response: Learning evil cliff hanger habits? What? *Looks around innocently.* Oh, you can't tell me that they're not enjoyable, if not a tad suspenseful! lol Thanks again. - August Sky.
Yes. That was an evil way to end the chapter. You did a good job on describing how Harry was feeling when he cut himself (and how it began, which links into Draco showing up), but it does seem a little unrealistic that he cut the words 'I'm sorry'. Just something to think about. I look forward to seeing what exactly this meditation entails.
However, I'm curious as to what happened to Ginny's conversation with Severus? (The one mentioned in chapter one?) Keep it up, can't wait for an update!
ps...did u mean MEDITATION as in the calming technique or did you mean MEDIATION where people get together to solve disputes? was just wondering. |
Powered by eFiction 3.5 |