This is really good. It's intriguing. I like a story with Dumbledore as a manipulative old coot. Please update soon!
Oh Dumbledore. Such far reaching mistakes... nice piece- it'll be interesting to see how Snape factors in- family of some sort I'm assuming!
| Title: Chapter 3 - With Conditions
| 19 Jun 2008 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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This story sounds really good so far. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next update should be up soon, just uploaded it. Forgive the long delay, completely unintentional.
good chapter. cant wait til the next.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. The next chapter should be up soon, sorry for the delayed semi-cliffhanger.
| Title: Chapter 3 - With Conditions
| 19 Jun 2008 8:46 am
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| Reviewer: Torny (Anonymous)
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Oh yes, it's not as if Snape has ever done anything for Harry Potter. Besides saving his life in his first year, trying to save it again his third, warning the Order that he'd gone to the Dept. of Mysteries in his fifth year. Harry is such a jerk at 15.
Your story is very nice so far. I'm looking forward to future updates.
Author's Response: Thank you. I distinctly remember wanting to choke Harry during the latter books, so I'm happy to know I'm keeping him in character. I'm glad it came off the way I intended it. I was concerned it would come off as MY voice rather than Harry's.
| Title: Chapter 2 - Mnemosyne
| 11 Jun 2008 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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This is well written. From the perspective of the narrator, I also believe that the wizarding world deserves to pay for what has been done. I seldom choose to read stories like this, but yours has such a flair that I can't wait to see Dumbledore get his. In fact, maybe his retribution should follow him from this world and into the next. . .
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so honored that it's caught your attention despite being outside your preference. I promise Dumbledore will be outsmarted by - well himself really. It'll be a lesson in Hubris for the wizarding world. Thank you for the review!
I don't trust Dumbledore one bit. I haven't since the first book.
Author's Response: Well spotted, I just thought him odd during the majority of the first book, although the post Quirrel conversation always put me on edge. Thank you so much for reviewing.
| Title: Chapter 2 - Mnemosyne
| 11 Jun 2008 1:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Manipulative bastard! Hope Sev hexs him good.
Author's Response: Lol, he won't be happy that's for sure, Dumbledore tends to invoke the best + worst in people - often simultaneously. Thank you so much for the review.
| Title: Chapter 2 - Mnemosyne
| 11 Jun 2008 8:53 am
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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Getting interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow, this is an interesting beginning.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try to keep it interesting.
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