| Title: Chapter 3 - With Conditions
| 19 Jun 2008 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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This story sounds really good so far. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next update should be up soon, just uploaded it. Forgive the long delay, completely unintentional.
good chapter. cant wait til the next.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. The next chapter should be up soon, sorry for the delayed semi-cliffhanger.
| Title: Chapter 3 - With Conditions
| 19 Jun 2008 8:46 am
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| Reviewer: Torny (Anonymous)
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Oh yes, it's not as if Snape has ever done anything for Harry Potter. Besides saving his life in his first year, trying to save it again his third, warning the Order that he'd gone to the Dept. of Mysteries in his fifth year. Harry is such a jerk at 15.
Your story is very nice so far. I'm looking forward to future updates.
Author's Response: Thank you. I distinctly remember wanting to choke Harry during the latter books, so I'm happy to know I'm keeping him in character. I'm glad it came off the way I intended it. I was concerned it would come off as MY voice rather than Harry's.
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