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Title: A life not including Dudley 29 Jul 2008 11:16 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Nicely written and a great premise for a story. I have read fics where the language is nowhere near as good as yours is...only a few mistakes, so the language thing is not really a problem.

    Onto chapter 2

    ~Wrappedinharry~
Title: A life not including Dudley 08 Jun 2008 5:32 am
Reviewer: Cayhleen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yeah, go Harry! :D
Title: A life not including Dudley 02 Jun 2008 9:43 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like this plot. I really hope you continue and update soon.
    Thanks for reading and writing

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Title: A life not including Dudley 02 Jun 2008 7:41 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very intriguing start. I can see lots of possibilities here and Dudley can either make it harder or easier with Snape. Glad you felt inspired to respond to the challenge.
Title: A life not including Dudley 02 Jun 2008 7:15 pm
Reviewer: hp_obsessed09 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really great start, so Hagrid and Harry have never met, that is kind of sad but I am really interested in how this is going to work. THis will be the first Dudley wizard fic I've read, to please keep writing!
Title: A life not including Dudley 02 Jun 2008 6:39 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a really good beginning. I have seen stories where it turns out that Dudley is a wizard but usully he is sorted in a different house than Slytherin.

    I am looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    I actually have some reasons why I sorted him into Slytherin. He is cunning, and a bit manipulative and doesn't hesitate to turn everything to his advantage, which I see as Slytherin traits. I mean, he is constantly manipulating Petunia and Vernon, and while they aren't the hardest people to trick, he has got to have some trace of that cunning in him to be able to do it. Also, he's the leader of his little gang, and leadership is actually one of the traits I personally attribute to Slytherin more than any other house.


    Also, I can't imagine Dudley in Gryffindor, because really, we've seen no evidence that he's brave ;), and he's not kind enough or loyal enough for Hufflepuff and really... Dudley in Ravenclaw? ;)
    But I'm not givingup on him yet, just because he's in Slytherin doesn't mean he has to be bad, right? :p

     

    Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Title: A life not including Dudley 02 Jun 2008 4:35 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Dudley in Hogwarts, what a brilliant idea! I can't wait to see what this has to do with Snape and how Dudley will act in Slytherin. I hope he causes lots of mayhem, lol. If Snape thinks Harry is bad just wait until he meets Dudley. At the first break you said Gryffindor Tower instead of table. It had me momentairily confused. Great job so far! :) I can't wait for more.
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: We'll see, we'll see. I have a couple of things planned, but since I just got this idea yesterday, I don't really know very uch yet.

    opps, i'll go in and changethat .:)

    thanks!
Title: A life not including Dudley 02 Jun 2008 8:21 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This sounds really interesting. I've only read one other story that had Dudley going to Hogwarts, but I really like the idea, and it's quite plausible too. I hope you continue with this XD Just a small spelling error; obediently is spelt as I wrote it, with an 'e' between the 'b' and the 'd', and another 'i' after the 'd', not 'obidently'.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
    I'll try to continue writing it, seeing as I'm really happy with the response I've gotten for it.
    I can never learn how to spell that :P
Title: A life not including Dudley 02 Jun 2008 8:03 am
Reviewer: SH (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh my!
    That sounds like it is going to be a scary and interessting story!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Title: A life not including Dudley 02 Jun 2008 6:38 am
Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, as much as a rat as he is, I kinda have to pity Dudley in Slytherin, surrounded by all those pure blooded bigots.

    Author's Response: Mwhihhi. That will be an issue, later on. XD

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