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Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 13 Dec 2012 12:49 am
Reviewer: MyDarkGuardian (Signed) [Report This]
    This is very good, except, if transfigurations was Harry's very first class, how could snape know that harry was bad at potions? Maybe that could be changed to snape saying he was arrogant, like his father, feeling as though the rules never applied to him. Just a thought. Thanks very much!
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 22 Aug 2008 10:02 pm
Reviewer: Just_A_Reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How wonderful! I love your style, it is very reminiscent of the actual books. You give the exact deviations (or better) that people would expect with having Dudley there, but the way you say it prevents any déjà-vu feeling.

    Great job!
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 29 Jul 2008 11:37 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    The scene with Snape was a good build up. But I so hope our potions master is not going to prefer Dudley to Harry.

    But as he is a Slytherin, I suppose that's a given.

    Still interested in seeing where this is going.

    I take it that Harry knows nothing about his parents or his Gringotts account as Hagrid doesnt seem to be in the equation.

    ~wrappedinharry~

    Author's Response:

    Oh, well spotted.
    Harry has missed out on a couple of things since Hagrid didn't pick him up. But he wil meet Hagrig eventually :)

    Thanks for reviewing!!! 

Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 11 Jun 2008 11:03 pm
Reviewer: Neko Youkia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    An excellent story! It's rather interesting to think of how things would be different if Dudley was at Hogwarts. I think the pace is just fine. (I'm rather excited about the thought of Dudley in Snape's Potions class in the next chapter. (Absolutly bound to give Snape a headache, even if he doesn't show it.)

    Author's Response: Thank you.
    And yes, Snape will have quite a year. :P
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 09 Jun 2008 6:31 am
Reviewer: IloveSevandHarry (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it!!! I can't wait to read another chapter!! XD

    Author's Response: New chapter up, I hope you like it :)
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 07 Jun 2008 12:01 am
Reviewer: joel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pacings good. Perhaps slightly fast, but its difficult to say at this early stage. I really like this so far. I've been hoping to see a fic for a while that explores what would happen if Dudley got into Hogwarts (without him suddenly becoming nice to Harry!)

    Keep writing, and hurry up, i'm excited! :D

    Author's Response: New chapter up, I hope you like it.

    I will try to keep everyone in character, and make everything as realistic as I can.
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 05 Jun 2008 11:58 pm
Reviewer: boycrazy30008 (Signed) [Report This]
    loved this story

    Author's Response: Thanks :)
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 3:39 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I am enjoying the little things that have changed since Dudley is at Hogwarts. Now I'm eager to see just how observant Snape is in your story.

    Author's Response: I think it's hard to decide how much should change, but I'm glad to hear you like it. :)
Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 4:12 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    In many stories Harry did not do well in Muggle Primary School because he could not bring home a report which showed that he did better than Dudley so Harry might deliberately decided to do poorly in his classes I hope teachers like Snape realise that he is not performing his best and decide to stop this attitude. Right now Snape might be mean but with Harry wearing second hand clothes and I'm sure with second hand books and equipment and with Dudley informing the others about Harry being a freak Snape is going to figure out quickly that Harry is not like his rich spoilt father but that he is bullied and abused at home. Hope Snape decides to help Harry.

    Author's Response:

    I'd forgotten that, actually, but you're right... So many new ideas!

     

Title: Intermezzos in a hallway 03 Jun 2008 3:48 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, fast update! Yay you! Fast updates rock, :) Sean? Seamus?, Harry thought) gripped his arm lightly (I think you need a period here) Great job so far! Congrats on all your reviews! I don't think it's going to slow. Will Draco be in this story a lot or just as a regular character?
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: Thanks :)

    Right now, I'm trying to decide how Draco's relationship will be with Dudley, and that will also decide how much he'll in the story.

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